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Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
From bloodshot crying eyes
mascara tears streak tainted life
as emotions escape off my skin
I knew you were gone in that very second
because only one heart beat was felt within me
looking at your pictures of happiness with her
How could it be that your eyes look away
focusing on her fake smile on deceitful lips
empty feelings of void is what you've left
I luved you beyond the price of my soul
now the devil owns it as his trophy of triumphs
burning in a fiery pit in hell inside the loins of betrayal
Turn your back and walk away
my eyes have etched every memory upon your heart
leaving the burn where I once flowed
You chose death....so die already
mascara tears streak tainted life
as emotions escape off my skin
I knew you were gone in that very second
because only one heart beat was felt within me
looking at your pictures of happiness with her
How could it be that your eyes look away
focusing on her fake smile on deceitful lips
empty feelings of void is what you've left
I luved you beyond the price of my soul
now the devil owns it as his trophy of triumphs
burning in a fiery pit in hell inside the loins of betrayal
Turn your back and walk away
my eyes have etched every memory upon your heart
leaving the burn where I once flowed
You chose death....so die already
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Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
Anonymous
24th Nov 2016 4:07pm
Such a powerful piece!
Two voices which created a true emotional masterpiece!
"the price of my soul
now the devil owns it as his trophy of triumphs
burning in a fiery pit in hell inside
the loins of betrayal"
---love this.
Powerful ink indeed 💓
Two voices which created a true emotional masterpiece!
"the price of my soul
now the devil owns it as his trophy of triumphs
burning in a fiery pit in hell inside
the loins of betrayal"
---love this.
Powerful ink indeed 💓
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Re: Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
Hey Heart......we thank you for your wonderful comment........happy our combined voices made an impact.......appreciate you.....luv & hugs from us xo :)
Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
24th Nov 2016 6:57pm
excellent shall be back searching a sole no soul all is fair n love and war we all to lovers like Romeo and Juliet still bow we all take a wow just to fill the legal gap then forget all about it when we lie in another's lap all sapped
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Re: Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
24th Nov 2016 7:28pm
Hey Again.......we thank you for stopping by and leaving your print upon our ink.......this is how it goes......luv & hugs from us xo :)
Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
Nothing like telling it like it is, flower.
Each stanza inching along with the
truth of what was being done to you,
until, at the end all the hell you had
been given was focused back on
him . . . In spades!
Each stanza inching along with the
truth of what was being done to you,
until, at the end all the hell you had
been given was focused back on
him . . . In spades!
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Re: Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
25th Nov 2016 3:37am
Hey Jerry......there's a lot behind this one......we can't reveal any stories but this is definetely a part of both Lily & I together......thank you for sharing your thoughts with us......luv & hugs from us xo :)
Re: Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
25th Nov 2016 4:24am
"we can't reveal any stories"
I guess not, but in almost every poem I write I reveal stories. I suppose what you are saying is that you don't want to name names. That's cool. As we used to say back in tha day, I can dig it!
I guess not, but in almost every poem I write I reveal stories. I suppose what you are saying is that you don't want to name names. That's cool. As we used to say back in tha day, I can dig it!
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Re: Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
Haha Jerry!! Too funny........I think I will leave the mystery open.......I will say this......most of my writes have a line or two specific for who it's writen for or inspired by.......SHE will know my line.......Lily & I both felt this write deeply......but that's a story our hearts will forever feel.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
"I luved you beyond the price of my soul" > this line speaks volumes...
Your voices merged flawlessly... it was hard to see who wrote what!
Well done, you two!
P.S. Love the picture :-)
Your voices merged flawlessly... it was hard to see who wrote what!
Well done, you two!
P.S. Love the picture :-)
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Re: Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
25th Nov 2016 5:44pm
Hey Duende........we thank you so much for your graceful words upon our ink.......Lily is awesome to write with......glad you like the pic......some of our words were written around it.......luv & hugs from us xo :)
Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
25th Nov 2016 7:09pm
ouchy!!! I just love the last line and how you got there. Again the collab was seamless - one to be proud of :-)
Excellent ink you two :-)
Excellent ink you two :-)
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Re: Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
26th Nov 2016 4:16am
Hey David.......we thank you for your sympathetic response......yep this one hurt......but we are both stronger women for getting thru our experiences.......appreciate your valued words.......we are proud of all we've written together......I luv sharing ink with Lily.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
25th Nov 2016 8:02pm
ouchy!!! I just love the last line and how you got there. Again the collab was seamless - one to be proud of :-)
Excellent ink you two :-)
Excellent ink you two :-)
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Re: Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
27th Nov 2016 3:23am
Turkey honored by the RL add on.....we thank you David.....luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Dripping Emotions (co-write with Lily & Flower)
27th Nov 2016 3:25am
Haha Sweet Lily.......you know your added words make this write wicked.......thank you for joining me in this....always an honor to wrote with you......luv & hugs xo :)