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Just Let Me Love You
We'll meet for coffee at 4am
All the city sleeping
Except for us
We've had this semi-romance forever
Without spending any time together
Harsh fluorescent lighting
Won't dim my admiration
We're lovers who never had time to love
Just coffee
Dark, no sugar
All the city sleeping
Except for us
We've had this semi-romance forever
Without spending any time together
Harsh fluorescent lighting
Won't dim my admiration
We're lovers who never had time to love
Just coffee
Dark, no sugar
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Re. Just Let Me Love You
20th Nov 2016 1:43pm
The mystery and beauty of this is wonderful! Like a shadowy stranger only you can see, no matter how the reader tries. ☺
Willow
Willow
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Re. Just Let Me Love You
20th Nov 2016 1:45pm
Re. Just Let Me Love You
20th Nov 2016 2:02pm
love this Poet so romantic knowing you feel this way about someone you've yet to meet..
xo Brenda
xo Brenda
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Re. Just Let Me Love You
20th Nov 2016 2:45pm
Re. Just Let Me Love You
20th Nov 2016 4:46pm
beautiful...I am always surprised how much coffee plays in budding romances...
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Re: Re. Just Let Me Love You
20th Nov 2016 5:09pm
Maybe it's because you have to sip it slow, just like romance, the real ones happen over time .....
Great comment EM
Great comment EM
Re. Just Let Me Love You
20th Nov 2016 7:13pm
A feeling so familiar to me! How you can feel from a far an never hold. Beautiful! Love this, its going on my reading list!
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Re. Just Let Me Love You
20th Nov 2016 8:00pm
Thanks for the comment and the RL add Erotic
Getting the feeling you and approach from the same plane .....
Getting the feeling you and approach from the same plane .....
Re. Just Let Me Love You
21st Nov 2016 2:31am
Re. Just Let Me Love You
21st Nov 2016 8:13am
a nice subtle romantic piece - this feels different, stands out and not a clothes peg in sight :-)
I really like this a lot :-)
I really like this a lot :-)
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Re. Just Let Me Love You
21st Nov 2016 12:04pm
It came to me while I was taking a leak .....
Strange how the poem comes to you when you least expect it .....
Thx D
Strange how the poem comes to you when you least expect it .....
Thx D
Re. Just Let Me Love You
21st Nov 2016 3:17pm
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Re. Just Let Me Love You
21st Nov 2016 7:08pm
I love the image this write conjurs, Poet. There's no time like the present, and the title is killer.
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21st Nov 2016 10:21pm