Pain of Love

Tommie so beautiful in love..

xo Brenda

Thanks very much Brenda 😊

it shows thru the makeup;
sad verses, Tommie...

Thanks John 😊

Favourite line:

Does the loneliness of it wrap around you?

Thank you SS 😊

Indeed these words do wrap around me and show me very clearly how you feel. Beautiful, Tommie! Brava!

Thanks GW 😊

it shows           
upon the windowsill you cried            
wishing you could drown         
loneliness in the rain          
long enough to convince yourself          
it had been awhile since it felt        
like love died yesterday...           
             
it shows            
under wrinkled bedding          
left cold in the corner          
when you finally let yourself get angry            
because you've always wondered            
why your hearts desires            
have always been like friendly strangers            
who never come to stay...           
      
it shows          
when all I have left inside leaves me feeling   
as empty as those gut-wrenching days          
where all I wanted was the ability to focus     
through the blur of endless tears         
just long enough to get so lost in pictures of us          
it almost felt as though you still loved me...          
         
Thanks for the inspiration, Tommy Lynn... Our first collab..  ;)

Thanks DiscipleofLife, I appreciate it.
Your write is great! 😊

Love is more than 15 minutes of sex or what big breasts look like. Nice poem.

nice read...

makes me remember her lines:

"you don't need to ask and i don't need to explain... if your promise is real, then you should feel the same"

and after a month, we broke up.