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She..At The Abyss
t'was one of those restless nights..
you remember yes?
remember the silent howling
that hawkish moon
the tossing..the turning.
the inner chambers churning..
in sweaty trepidation of
the visitors
...
your panorama of parasites..
here to commune with that dwarfish
incubus clawing beneath
agitated flesh
...
come my darkened lover
never mind them
allow me to secret you away
submerge deep
deep within this liquid fantasia
i have waiting
waiting just
for
..
you
..
feel tentacles tending tediously
nursing every shadow that lurks down under
suckling 'pon the tip of tantric sentiments
savoring every drip of thy sordidness
why the shyness now?
so unbefitting it is for one
such as yourself
...
come
come
..
drown the conundrum that is you
into my oblivion
too long have you lingered
at my event horizon
live...unafraid
be..forever unrepentant
for i have asphyxiated your peering jury.
fear their unjust fury
never again
..
never again
..
your nymph beckons urgently..
be my Namor..
my prince of torrid tsunamis
i am a fair mistress
after all
freely I give you allowance to
breathe in the filthiness of your conscious ilk
of those who undeservedly
warrant your affections..
but your subconscious belongs to me
every time your eyes close
I will be there at the threshold
awaiting the fulfillment
of every promise
you dared to dream between realms
...
entry for the The Magic of Merfolk, Sirens & Water Nymphs
comp sponsored by Jade Pandora
you remember yes?
remember the silent howling
that hawkish moon
the tossing..the turning.
the inner chambers churning..
in sweaty trepidation of
the visitors
...
your panorama of parasites..
here to commune with that dwarfish
incubus clawing beneath
agitated flesh
...
come my darkened lover
never mind them
allow me to secret you away
submerge deep
deep within this liquid fantasia
i have waiting
waiting just
for
..
you
..
feel tentacles tending tediously
nursing every shadow that lurks down under
suckling 'pon the tip of tantric sentiments
savoring every drip of thy sordidness
why the shyness now?
so unbefitting it is for one
such as yourself
...
come
come
..
drown the conundrum that is you
into my oblivion
too long have you lingered
at my event horizon
live...unafraid
be..forever unrepentant
for i have asphyxiated your peering jury.
fear their unjust fury
never again
..
never again
..
your nymph beckons urgently..
be my Namor..
my prince of torrid tsunamis
i am a fair mistress
after all
freely I give you allowance to
breathe in the filthiness of your conscious ilk
of those who undeservedly
warrant your affections..
but your subconscious belongs to me
every time your eyes close
I will be there at the threshold
awaiting the fulfillment
of every promise
you dared to dream between realms
...
entry for the The Magic of Merfolk, Sirens & Water Nymphs
comp sponsored by Jade Pandora
Published 19th Nov 2016
| Edited 12th Mar 2017
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2016 1:53am
Naaj....magical and mystical is this ink....I was swept away....
"drown the conundrum that is you
into my oblivion
too long have you lingered
at my event horizon
live...unafraid
be..forever unrepentant..
for i have asphyxiated your peering jury. <~~ can you come visit me - give a girl a hand won't you?
fear their unjust fury
never again"
~ LOVE!!!
xoxo Taryn
"drown the conundrum that is you
into my oblivion
too long have you lingered
at my event horizon
live...unafraid
be..forever unrepentant..
for i have asphyxiated your peering jury. <~~ can you come visit me - give a girl a hand won't you?
fear their unjust fury
never again"
~ LOVE!!!
xoxo Taryn
Anonymous
19th Nov 2016 4:00am
This was an interesting read, and I hope I'll have the time to really sink into it soon. One small thing gave me a bit of a pause, and that was the word 'tedious', because it's in a paragraph that tips toward the erotic, and tedium seems out of place there.
I can always count on your writing to tickle the part of my brain that loves word play and sounds.
I can always count on your writing to tickle the part of my brain that loves word play and sounds.
19th Nov 2016 5:12am
This is so beautiful, Naajir!
You really took me on a magical journey!
I like what you did in the second line: you remember, yes?
(there you got me engaged with your words)
awaiting the fulfillment
of every promise
you dared to dream between realms > that last line is just perfect! Can't think of a better ending!
You really took me on a magical journey!
I like what you did in the second line: you remember, yes?
(there you got me engaged with your words)
awaiting the fulfillment
of every promise
you dared to dream between realms > that last line is just perfect! Can't think of a better ending!
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
19th Nov 2016 7:28am
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19th Nov 2016 1:11pm
Oh my goodness....I feel this. You've expressed perfectly the siren that calls from the abyss of my own depression. (See "The Ledge" - what you've written is what I was trying to capture but was never happy with how it came out.) Problem is, I know my abyss also includes complete self-destruction. Which is, I guess, exactly what sirens do....
Just wow. This one's going on my shelf. Delicious.
Just wow. This one's going on my shelf. Delicious.
19th Nov 2016 3:20pm
"your nymph beckons urgently..
be my Namor..
my prince of torrid tsunamis
i am a fair mistress
after all "
... ... ... ...
AWESOME !
...
be my Namor..
my prince of torrid tsunamis
i am a fair mistress
after all "
... ... ... ...
AWESOME !
...
20th Nov 2016 8:37pm
Definitely the most poetic thing that I'm probably gonna read today , this is amazing in the most exquisite, poetic way . You have a way with words , this submission is just darling
why the shyness now
So direct, enough to make a girls knees weak. Great stuff
why the shyness now
So direct, enough to make a girls knees weak. Great stuff
21st Nov 2016 11:51am
A wonderful tsunami of words wash upon the shore of the mind, washing away dirt and grime, gifting sublime wisdom, and fine lines.
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Nov 2016 00:35am
26th Nov 2016 00:28am
i know this was for the comp,
But what a sexy abysmal piece, that also has
the ability to bring these two back into the
light, through transference and electricity of
sensual honesty when showing each other
what it is you both need and want.
deliciously godlike or namelessly
i prefer
and then this:
"
freely I give you allowance to
breathe in the filthiness of your conscious ilk
of those who undeservedly
warrant your affections..
but your subconscious belongs to me
every time your eyes close
I'll be there at the threshold
awaiting the fulfillment
of every promise
you dared to dream between realms"
Like never before, and charming
But what a sexy abysmal piece, that also has
the ability to bring these two back into the
light, through transference and electricity of
sensual honesty when showing each other
what it is you both need and want.
deliciously godlike or namelessly
i prefer
and then this:
"
freely I give you allowance to
breathe in the filthiness of your conscious ilk
of those who undeservedly
warrant your affections..
but your subconscious belongs to me
every time your eyes close
I'll be there at the threshold
awaiting the fulfillment
of every promise
you dared to dream between realms"
Like never before, and charming
