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Smoke
I don't smoke.
In all honesty the smell of cigarettes
brings me back to bad places,
and I wish you wouldn't try your health that way,
but
under a sun golden enough,
maybe I'll take a drag
just to humor
you and your pretty eyes.
In all honesty the smell of cigarettes
brings me back to bad places,
and I wish you wouldn't try your health that way,
but
under a sun golden enough,
maybe I'll take a drag
just to humor
you and your pretty eyes.
Published 15th Nov 2016
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16th Nov 2016 00:50am
i like this one! in particular i like that 'but' got its own line (beyond immature humor lol) cuz it is subtle yet dramatic. keep on keepin on homie!
16th Nov 2016 5:23pm
Ah, the things we do for Love...(or the potential of it...).
Nice twist and emphasis on, Rowan.
Nice twist and emphasis on, Rowan.
