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Glowing blue
Falling into glowing blue.
The shades draw deep but the sun comes through the surface.
It's purpose, broken, into rolling waves that sway and solely wash away, imperfect.
So, I'm certain, some things remain in our current view. It makes it easy to,
just be a wave, so I can stay and slowly wash away, in glowing you.
The shades draw deep but the sun comes through the surface.
It's purpose, broken, into rolling waves that sway and solely wash away, imperfect.
So, I'm certain, some things remain in our current view. It makes it easy to,
just be a wave, so I can stay and slowly wash away, in glowing you.
Published 15th Nov 2016
| Edited 21st Nov 2022
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15th Nov 2016 4:16pm
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15th Nov 2016 4:53pm
I think you captured these somber feelings perfectly. I loved how you played with the words as it had a lot of originality. Great ink!
15th Nov 2016 5:25pm
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