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Sins
Thou shalt not steal
Thou shalt not covet thy neighbors wife
For me those two comandments go hand and hand
For thats who i am
Nothing more than a mortal man
The temptations were to strong
But her taste was all wrong.
She tasted of lies and despise.
Of her matrimony of witch i stole
All for the cost of one lonley soul
Thou shalt not covet thy neighbors wife
For me those two comandments go hand and hand
For thats who i am
Nothing more than a mortal man
The temptations were to strong
But her taste was all wrong.
She tasted of lies and despise.
Of her matrimony of witch i stole
All for the cost of one lonley soul
Published 7th Nov 2016
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10th Nov 2016 11:53pm
12th Nov 2016 6:48pm
18th Nov 2016 11:44am
I very much liked the first few lines from it
("Thou shalt not steal
Thou shalt not covet thy neighbors wife
For me those two comandments go hand and hand
For thats who i am
Nothing more than a mortal man")
I also like how you used the ten commandment, I never really expect to see them in writing or used confessionally like you did.
I enjoyed the read, thank you for the write.
M/M
("Thou shalt not steal
Thou shalt not covet thy neighbors wife
For me those two comandments go hand and hand
For thats who i am
Nothing more than a mortal man")
I also like how you used the ten commandment, I never really expect to see them in writing or used confessionally like you did.
I enjoyed the read, thank you for the write.
M/M
30th Dec 2016 4:53am
