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Far Away

Over the ocean
past the sea
there he will be
the man that said he will marry me.

Written by Dancinginthedark

Published 3rd Nov 2016

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Re. Far Away

28th Mar 2017 3:18pm

nice...
I like it.

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30th Mar 2017 3:36pm

Thank you for your encouraging feedback!

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Re. Far Away

6th Apr 2017 3:38pm

I like how this poem can have so many meanings depending on the perspective on the reader

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6th Apr 2017 7:42pm

I appreciate your analysis of this piece, and that you understood it's depth.

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Re. Far Away

Anonymous

30th Aug 2017 3:33pm

Beautiful ❤