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Luv So Divine
our spirits soar thru the gates of Eden
to forever share sweet bliss of luv
sacred purple flames lighting our way
harmony whispered between our hearts
forever a song Angels choirs will hum
testimony of our luv so sacredly divine
moon shinning so beautiful and full
silhouettes our nakedness with its dim glow
across the universe stars shine bright
as the heavens witness our luving plight
a bond so great never to be broken
luv shared so divinely heaven bows in glory
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
to forever share sweet bliss of luv
sacred purple flames lighting our way
harmony whispered between our hearts
forever a song Angels choirs will hum
testimony of our luv so sacredly divine
moon shinning so beautiful and full
silhouettes our nakedness with its dim glow
across the universe stars shine bright
as the heavens witness our luving plight
a bond so great never to be broken
luv shared so divinely heaven bows in glory
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 1st Nov 2016
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1st Nov 2016 10:08pm
The last line was just absolutely super great, flower.
You painted a wonderful feeling of "Luv So Divine."
Reading it one can actually bask in the glory of that
wonderfulness!
You painted a wonderful feeling of "Luv So Divine."
Reading it one can actually bask in the glory of that
wonderfulness!
1st Nov 2016 11:14pm
Hey SG.......thank you for making my heart smile.......so thrilled you like this one and feel it's depths.......you're alwayss such an encouraging soul to me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
1st Nov 2016 11:07pm
moon shinning so beautiful and full
silhouettes our nakedness with its dim glow
across the universe stars shine bright
lovely
silhouettes our nakedness with its dim glow
across the universe stars shine bright
lovely
1st Nov 2016 11:17pm
Hi "8".......thank you so much for visiting my page........happy you liked those lines......purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Nov 2016 1:17am
Such a luvly verse. You make the Heavens glow with ultra-violet warmth from the fires of you purple luv. You write cosmic flowers across the universe of poetry...!
JJ
JJ
2nd Nov 2016 2:28am
Awe JJ.....your words always make me smile.......I always luv your insightful toughts.......thank you for leaving me fragrant cosmic flowers......purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Nov 2016 6:19am
The first line drew me in immediately!
Such an enchantingly beautiful piece, love it!
Love, Duende
Such an enchantingly beautiful piece, love it!
Love, Duende
2nd Nov 2016 3:15pm
Hey Duende.......I'm glad it lured you in.......happy you wandered thru the enchantment.......a very awesome experience to write this one.......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Nov 2016 8:22am
This is so beautiful! At first i felt it should have been in love category. But it did make me very upbeat, so both works ;-)
Awesomeness
Awesomeness
2nd Nov 2016 3:17pm
Hey Devils........actually I never know where to put them so I do the "happy" gender......LOL!! Thank you for your awesome words......honored by the RL add on.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Nov 2016 6:10pm
ur metaphors are aye one
luv==sex
soul==sole
naked==nudity
divine = him /his!
who will not read and comment on your erotica
inferred
coming from universal yes
purple
great one this lady
wonderfulllllllllllllllllllllll
luv==sex
soul==sole
naked==nudity
divine = him /his!
who will not read and comment on your erotica
inferred
coming from universal yes
purple
great one this lady
wonderfulllllllllllllllllllllll
3rd Nov 2016 3:39pm
Hey Again.....you've come to know my poetry language well.......thank you......always bring a smile to my page......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Nov 2016 8:08pm
yeah
i read minds only
play love in poetry solely
half passsssssss 666666666666666666666666666
i read minds only
play love in poetry solely
half passsssssss 666666666666666666666666666
4th Nov 2016 4:45pm
4th Nov 2016 6:40pm
yeps ur minds purple ink
flows
my pens
white does
started all over again
humans will have
no need to complain
shall compose soonly
when i am others emotionally moving
those who need me
so many r cumming daily
go see purply
thanks to thee
ur purple poetry is
lovoleee
flows
my pens
white does
started all over again
humans will have
no need to complain
shall compose soonly
when i am others emotionally moving
those who need me
so many r cumming daily
go see purply
thanks to thee
ur purple poetry is
lovoleee
2nd Nov 2016 11:04pm
3rd Nov 2016 3:42pm
Awe Naajir.......alwys luv your visit and smile upon my page.......thank you for your encouragement......happy you enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Nov 2016 1:52am
3rd Nov 2016 3:44pm
Hey 23.......happy to see your smile again.......glad you enjoyed......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Nov 2016 6:33am
Really dreamy poem - you are so good at writing about love - I hope it's what you have and you are writing from personal experience :-)
excellent write :-)
excellent write :-)
3rd Nov 2016 3:47pm
Hey David......well all I say is it's real in my heart......words and dreams.......maybe one day it will be real physically.......thank you for the thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Nov 2016 7:42pm
There are so many demons deep underground, including my own, that it's a joy to find a few angels. You're one of them Flower, at least a good part of the time.
harmony whispered between our hearts
forever a song Angels choirs will hum
testimony of our luv so sacredly divine
You keep it sacred but know how to have some fun once in a while. For now, this one is simply divine sweet Flower.
harmony whispered between our hearts
forever a song Angels choirs will hum
testimony of our luv so sacredly divine
You keep it sacred but know how to have some fun once in a while. For now, this one is simply divine sweet Flower.
4th Nov 2016 4:49pm
Haha Crow.......glad you said "a good part of the time".......thank you for the compliment.......your words always make me smile and glad I'm still here.......for now......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Nov 2016 9:26pm
loveliest cleavage
soft erotica
i am learning from you poet
you have taught me
so much to learn yet
more poetry to beget
soft erotica
i am learning from you poet
you have taught me
so much to learn yet
more poetry to beget
6th Nov 2016 2:11am
Again......your words make me emotional........Im very honored that you've learned from me in someway.......I think that's what poetry is all about......thank you for bringing a smile to me tonight......purple ouv & hugs xo :)
7th Nov 2016 10:40am
Wonderful imagery I must say. To paint this picture of love from its beginning is quite something only a subtle mind could do.
Nice one Gail. I enjoyed every read.
Best regards,
Ossy
Nice one Gail. I enjoyed every read.
Best regards,
Ossy
9th Nov 2016 00:37am
Hey Ozzy.......I was thinking about you the other day......great to see your smile upon my page......glad you enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
