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Sentient
We are taken by water
refractions of colored marble
across damp skin of rock
ruddy sediment shifts
ribbons downstream
sensing presence our eyes avert
kindred sentient meet our gaze –
for the longest of seconds
I was that doe looking back at me
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Published 31st Oct 2016
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31st Oct 2016 10:43pm
such understanding is rare -
well, anyway, it is round here -
although we don't have many deer... :)
a moment beautifully caught...
well, anyway, it is round here -
although we don't have many deer... :)
a moment beautifully caught...
1st Nov 2016 3:01am
1st Nov 2016 3:18am
Gorgeous and moving. I find that as my awareness grows, my sense of distinction diminishes and my sense of connection and sameness grows along with it.
1st Nov 2016 6:39am
Amazing writing style,lingering on things that go unnoticed by most. Very beautiful....
1st Nov 2016 8:24am
1st Nov 2016 7:11pm
kindred sentient meet our gaze –
for the longest of seconds
I was that doe looking back at me <-----smh just so real and raw...
you are an amazing writer my dear sister Ahavati
stunning depth, u just always grabbed the reader and take us there!
love Zazzles Xo
for the longest of seconds
I was that doe looking back at me <-----smh just so real and raw...
you are an amazing writer my dear sister Ahavati
stunning depth, u just always grabbed the reader and take us there!
love Zazzles Xo
3rd Nov 2016 1:54am
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2016 3:43pm
I wish to be there, right now
instead of feeling split apart.
you've given me an idea,
something I must do,
to share my nature with nature
I need this, its been too long.
its cleansing time again
Thank you beauty!
instead of feeling split apart.
you've given me an idea,
something I must do,
to share my nature with nature
I need this, its been too long.
its cleansing time again
Thank you beauty!
Anonymous
8th Nov 2016 8:40am
Thank you for the calm tone.. peaceful
✨Trish
✨Trish
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26th Nov 2016 1:33am
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