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Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
Strawberry Sweet
Are those words you spit at me
Take me
Dance and romance our livity
Grab my hand, take a chance
Got no plans
So walk with me
Do you see the flowing
Of the energy that's forming
Above the Suns of you and me
Keep your mind on this trip
Have you thinking of my lips
As a rose in a flower vase
The way you form your words
Is like an angel in the sky
Tracing me into an embrace
Do the minds of our bodies
Greet the souls of our minds?
Or is just souls and bodies?
But most importantly.....
Do we have all three?
Connected to each others?
Or will this walk be a calamity?
Theoretical Love
Are those words you spit at me
Take me
Dance and romance our livity
Grab my hand, take a chance
Got no plans
So walk with me
Do you see the flowing
Of the energy that's forming
Above the Suns of you and me
Keep your mind on this trip
Have you thinking of my lips
As a rose in a flower vase
The way you form your words
Is like an angel in the sky
Tracing me into an embrace
Do the minds of our bodies
Greet the souls of our minds?
Or is just souls and bodies?
But most importantly.....
Do we have all three?
Connected to each others?
Or will this walk be a calamity?
Theoretical Love
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Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 8:51am
His words to you inspire your philosophy to create the foundation of theoretical love that becomes a law unto itself when finally realized...
Your reading is so hypnotizing I had to read the words separately, as the sound of your voice pulled my mind away from my eyes and I had to just listen, or just to read. I cannot concentrate on them together...
Beautifully done on both parts!
JJ
Your reading is so hypnotizing I had to read the words separately, as the sound of your voice pulled my mind away from my eyes and I had to just listen, or just to read. I cannot concentrate on them together...
Beautifully done on both parts!
JJ
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Re: Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 2:02pm
"The philosophy to create the foundation of theoretical love". So powerful! I dearly appreciate you listening!
Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 10:18am
Insanely beautiful, n rhythmically hypnotizing written n spoken piece... Loved this my dear lady :)
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Re: Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 2:03pm
Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 12:04pm
.....I really dig this (and your voice is just, wow......) Do you sing/perform professionally? Great stuff 😋
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Re: Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 2:04pm
Thank you so much! And I do sing! Not professionally, just a shower/car/kitchen/anywhere closet singer 😊 But I do open mics as often as I can
Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
Your sultry voice adds to the seductive quality of the poem. Very nicely done.
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Re: Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 2:05pm
Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 8:02pm
Dazzling and enchanting voice is dope and the track is awesome...
I like pretty thoughts jus a bit better though 😉 You've got great taste
Your a brilliant being...
I like pretty thoughts jus a bit better though 😉 You've got great taste
Your a brilliant being...
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Re: Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 10:19pm
I'm flattered. If I could only be s fraction of brilliant I would be content with life 😊. Pretty thoughts is my on my too ten. But the flow and lyrics to make you feel is what inspired this poem. Intriguing...extremely. Thank you for Vibin....an knowing
Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 9:47pm
very mesmerizing you are with your vocals lady..
this spoken word definitely gives your poem
that added texture...sensual with that flow indeed!!!
yes ma'am..
this spoken word definitely gives your poem
that added texture...sensual with that flow indeed!!!
yes ma'am..
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Re: Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
28th Oct 2016 10:24pm
Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
29th Oct 2016 4:22pm
Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
Anonymous
29th Oct 2016 5:03pm
Hey Lyrical........what an awesome ink.......luv the background music and your magical voice........enjoyed this very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
29th Oct 2016 5:07pm
Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
6th Dec 2016 2:29am
Romance to my ears, poetry to my eyes, and soul to my mind! What sweet inklings, and sexy verbiage!
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6th Dec 2016 3:32am
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6th Dec 2016 11:47am
Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
21st Sep 2017 00:01am
This is a great write and the alluring voice mashes up nicely
Almost a new Orleans style accent
Almost a new Orleans style accent
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Re: Re. Theoretical Love (repost for spoken word)
21st Sep 2017 3:00am
Why thank you for taking the time to listen/read. Funny I get asked quite often if I am from the south. 😊