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Gumbo Chronicles
Spicy
High octane heat
Do the math
I'm burning up
You're packing dynamite
Bulging with want
Just a little taste
Sweating your fire
High octane heat
Do the math
I'm burning up
You're packing dynamite
Bulging with want
Just a little taste
Sweating your fire
Published 27th Oct 2016
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27th Oct 2016 10:20pm
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Anonymous
28th Oct 2016 4:54am
It delivers a great deal of effective imagery for such a short work, very well done.
28th Oct 2016 12:25pm
28th Oct 2016 5:15am
Short but sweet.
Sometimes... 'just a little taste' goes a long way to remain tight ! 🎈🌻😎🌞
Sometimes... 'just a little taste' goes a long way to remain tight ! 🎈🌻😎🌞
28th Oct 2016 12:26pm
28th Oct 2016 1:54pm
You have the most amazing sizzle to your writing here. I've never had gumbo but I love spicy! You certainly delivered here. :)
Willow
Willow
28th Oct 2016 8:39pm
28th Oct 2016 9:41pm
28th Oct 2016 10:53pm
29th Oct 2016 9:06pm
29th Oct 2016 11:41pm
Thx D
Maybe pour some 4 Roses Small Batch to go with it ....
New bottle waiting
Maybe pour some 4 Roses Small Batch to go with it ....
New bottle waiting
21st Oct 2017 1:42pm
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