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Our Private World ~ we dream of (collab Bee & Flower)
our private world where only we exist
crystal clear emerald pond
where cascading waterfalls hum a luv song
and our hearts so in luv sing along
skies streaked with an amazing sunset
reflects off the ponds surface of heart shaped ripples
and lavender flowers sway in the gentle breeze
you & me standing before each other
naked skin
naked hearts
naked souls
nothing hiding from the other
all is there for our eyes to see and hearts to feel
our luv glistening like stars in the purple moon light
how amazing is our private world
crystal clear emerald pond
where cascading waterfalls hum a luv song
and our hearts so in luv sing along
skies streaked with an amazing sunset
reflects off the ponds surface of heart shaped ripples
and lavender flowers sway in the gentle breeze
you & me standing before each other
naked skin
naked hearts
naked souls
nothing hiding from the other
all is there for our eyes to see and hearts to feel
our luv glistening like stars in the purple moon light
how amazing is our private world
Published 27th Oct 2016
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27th Oct 2016 4:13am
Sweet harmony in passionate verse filled with wondrous imagery! Excellent collab!
JJ
JJ
28th Oct 2016 6:10pm
Hey JJ.......we thank you for your response........glad you stopped to visit our world.......luv & hugs xo :)
27th Oct 2016 6:15am
Its beautiful to find worlds of meaning in ourselves and tenderness in each other. Someone comes along that you are drawn to and you come alive with them, defining experiences in life.
28th Oct 2016 6:12pm
Hey David........what beautiful words you've left us.......great insight on this.......it's an awesome experience.......we thank you......luv & hugs xo :)
27th Oct 2016 8:11am
29th Oct 2016 2:14am
Hi SO......always a pleasure to see your smile upon my ink.......thank you......glad you enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th Oct 2016 2:40pm
Wonderful thoughts of love and sharing . . . Excellent write, Bee and Flower!
29th Oct 2016 2:19am
Hey SG.......so happy you enjoyed our shared pen.....thank you for your wonderful encouraging words to us......purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th Oct 2016 5:26pm
so good it doesn't feel like a collab - that's when you know it has worked - this is a really dreamy piece, gave me that warm fuzzy feeling inside :-)
29th Oct 2016 3:47am
Hey David........your words just gave us "warm fuzzies".......we thank you very much for you graceful words.......happy you enjoyed.....luv & hugs xo :)
27th Oct 2016 7:29pm
29th Oct 2016 3:57am
Hi Whale......always a smile to you.......thank you for your words upon our ink......appreciate your visit......luv & hugs xo :)
27th Oct 2016 10:14pm
such a happy, heart felt piece, made me want to find this place, share it with my love, and hold it for forever :)
29th Oct 2016 3:59am
Awe FL.....we are so happy you felt the sacredness that can be shared between two souls.......the first place to look......is your hearts when with just a hug you become one......luv & hugs xo :)
27th Oct 2016 11:06pm
Beautiful work, Flower. You and Bee are as lovely as the Paradise you're standing in. Going naked here means honesty and the courage to remain vulnerable, seems to me. You two have each other. Thanks for the glimpse into your private world!
29th Oct 2016 4:08am
Awe Crow........your insight on this is straight on......we thank you for beautiful words you leave us.......appreciate you having a peek into our world......luv & hugs xo :)
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28th Oct 2016 1:36am
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29th Oct 2016 4:19am
Thank you Sista.......you know we both luv ya mooches.......it's a beautiful world sharing it with the right soul......luv & hugs xo :)
