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Upside Down Tequila Bottle & Waves
When glass rides waves
reflecting the suns bright
kiss. Holding parchment
dry & paint un-smudged
the message remains
the s a m e, surfing in
dreams to island steams
When passion gets
overtaken, we're just
doing our best, better
than best & the label,
lable was used to scribe
there's no backwash
spit or bottle splutter
Got to hold em back
reel them in tight
duct-taped-shut' lips
concealing gagged
mouths, in holding
them in
the bottle;
the bottle
m e s s a g e
still needs
to be read
be corked
&read
&heard
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reflecting the suns bright
kiss. Holding parchment
dry & paint un-smudged
the message remains
the s a m e, surfing in
dreams to island steams
When passion gets
overtaken, we're just
doing our best, better
than best & the label,
lable was used to scribe
there's no backwash
spit or bottle splutter
Got to hold em back
reel them in tight
duct-taped-shut' lips
concealing gagged
mouths, in holding
them in
the bottle;
the bottle
m e s s a g e
still needs
to be read
be corked
&read
&heard
Replied
- x -
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