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Ocean Tide
breathing deeply into each other
our sacred luv and desires
as two spirits kiss upon waves
scent of sweet essence in the wind
deeper within my heart you abide
with each mystery we discover
knowing luv yet to be awakened
reaching for each other's souls
purple flames dancing by moon light
capturing sacredness of all that we are
chasing pain of dark shadows away
never to exist in our souls ever again
consume my all with your sacred kiss
let me feel your aroused state of mind
as my fingertips roam your velvet skin
so smooth, unblemished like a perfect rose
come now my sweet luv, my only desire
let's make sweet horny luv in the oceans tide
taking our journey to Eden's paradise
then lay inside each other's hug for eternity
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
our sacred luv and desires
as two spirits kiss upon waves
scent of sweet essence in the wind
deeper within my heart you abide
with each mystery we discover
knowing luv yet to be awakened
reaching for each other's souls
purple flames dancing by moon light
capturing sacredness of all that we are
chasing pain of dark shadows away
never to exist in our souls ever again
consume my all with your sacred kiss
let me feel your aroused state of mind
as my fingertips roam your velvet skin
so smooth, unblemished like a perfect rose
come now my sweet luv, my only desire
let's make sweet horny luv in the oceans tide
taking our journey to Eden's paradise
then lay inside each other's hug for eternity
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Ocean Tide
23rd Oct 2016 3:24am
a most tender and loving erotic so beautifully penned lovely Flower :)
love Crim
love Crim
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23rd Oct 2016 4:28am
Thank you precious Crim.......you're words are always a delightful treasure......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ocean Tide
23rd Oct 2016 3:34am
Reprising your "Breathe into Me" poem, this is a most provocative piece. Is there any other kind of love making besides horny love making? Oh wait, horny purple love making...
Wonderfully expressed G!
JJ
Wonderfully expressed G!
JJ
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23rd Oct 2016 4:38am
Why thank you JJ......i did have that one in mind and "Walk A Mile".......inspired by them both.......hope that's not weird to be inspired by your own writes......LOL!! Mmmmmmmm......honestly.......I would take either one.......thank you for triggering my imagination right before bed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ocean Tide
"horny purple love making..."
That is one sure way of putting it.
This is a wonderful poem, flower.
Happy I got to see it before I hit
the sack.
That is one sure way of putting it.
This is a wonderful poem, flower.
Happy I got to see it before I hit
the sack.
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23rd Oct 2016 4:45am
Awe thank you for the late night visit SG......glad you enjoyed this.......I couldn't help to ink that line.......LOL!! Thrilled that you liked this one......always a blessing when you smile upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2016 6:32am
Such a beautiful, passionate write 💜
The sensual words flow on this page and carries every portion of the reader with them.
Brilliant inking.
The sensual words flow on this page and carries every portion of the reader with them.
Brilliant inking.
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Re: Re. Ocean Tide
25th Oct 2016 1:23am
Awe Heart you always make me smile.......I'm thrilled you liked this one......thank you for your graceful words.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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23rd Oct 2016 11:34am
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25th Oct 2016 1:27am
Hey EW.....you're always such an encrouagemnt to me......I thank you so much for your kind words.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ocean Tide
23rd Oct 2016 4:55pm
I just love subtle erotica that still manages to retain some mystery, some need for the reader to use their imagination :-)
excellent write :-)
excellent write :-)
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25th Oct 2016 1:19am
Hey David......I'm so glad I didn't spoil the use of your imagination........I luv closing my eyes and let my imagination take over.......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ocean Tide
23rd Oct 2016 6:51pm
A passionate write. Pic reminds me of the classic beachside movie scene in "From Here To Eternity".
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25th Oct 2016 1:21am
Hey Solomon.......I have to watch that movie for sure.......appreciate the comparison.......alwayss honored to see your smile.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ocean Tide
23rd Oct 2016 9:30pm
No one blends the sacred and erotic like you Flower. I can almost hear the waves reading this, and feel the luv. I think of that scene from "From Here To Eternity," but with Burt Lancaster embracing Flower while the tide crashes in. Wonderful work!
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25th Oct 2016 1:29am
Hey Crow.....always making me glad I post here still.......thank you...what vision you leave me with.......in the arms of Burt Lancaster......now that's a dream I hope I have.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ocean Tide
24th Oct 2016 5:28am
Strong imagery and the title of the piece ties it all together. A lovely piece.
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25th Oct 2016 1:30am
Thank you ES.......always find grace in your presence.......glad you enjoyed this piece.....it was wonderful to write.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2016 12:08pm
Very seductive .. Flower.
✨Trish
✨Trish
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Re: Re. Ocean Tide
25th Oct 2016 1:31am
Hey Trish.....always a pleaure to see your smile upon my page.......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ocean Tide
1st Nov 2016 1:00am
Love, if only I could be in moments such as this,
damn, yes
excusez moi, s'il te plait
PS, and please forgive my delay, sometimes I am
on and sometimes not.. but not for one second
are you forgotten.. muwah darling
-Howlings
damn, yes
excusez moi, s'il te plait
PS, and please forgive my delay, sometimes I am
on and sometimes not.. but not for one second
are you forgotten.. muwah darling
-Howlings
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1st Nov 2016 1:22am
Awe Howling......you've touched my heart my sweet precious friend......thank you for such beautiful words......you're never forgotten by me either.......MAWH!!! Purple luv & hugs sent your way xo :)