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Esoteric Suicide: A Reading Poem

It was a suicide: That did him in
Had been sick and depressed for a while;
Wasn't very happy here, did not fit in;
The big thing was that no one would hear him
This online community would; that he joined,
And it was like a large group of outcasts,
Or men who felt like misfits on this Earth
Not sure if he had some encouragement,
To do the last deed and take his own life.
Not discouraged on the website before:
A user posting, as another man,
Seemed to coerce him into suicide.
Did indeed feel alone; like no one understood,
And this one person online plays a role.

It was a website: Only tried to help
Had been too far gone on his own without;
Body image and social issues come up;
He felt always like the nerd, the outcast
In a lot of pain; but now he is at peace,
He took a trip before the suicide,
Or rather he wanted one last good time
Not more than two weeks prior to his death,
To ingrain a last good memory so.
But this entity is apt at peace now:
Had to be cocooned, to ward off trauma,
The site not to blame, only tried to help.
But only this one man; one bad seed on that site,
And his soul has rested with transition.

He doesn't want you: To be so maudlin
He will accomplish more there than on Earth;
The closet in his room holds the last secret;
He appreciates you kept his room same
And he wishes you; celebrate his birthday,
He knows now what he did at peace with it,
Or knows the consequences now he sees
It will come out stigma will be erased,
He feels he can accomplish more there.
Do what he wasn't able on this Earth:
Unhappy was he here, nights without sleep,
Nor will he reincarnate very soon.
He says 'You leave with peace'; it is better this way,
And with that he steps back and he is gone.

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Poetry performance. A fictional reading on a suicide case.  Cold Tarot reading while gazing down into a crystal ball.

Written in 'Blank Verse' format, three parts or three paragraphs.

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