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an Angel's Wings Unfurled
I got up late and sped off to work for another dreadful day
Stopped to eat two Egg-Mcmuffins along my un-merry way
Washed 'em down with diet Coke without a moment to delay
Driving to a job I hate because I've got too many bills to pay
When I arrived I learned it was my turn to watch over Satan's child
The little girl the nurses called the devil's spawn, untamable and wild
Be careful with that one, they warned, don't become beguiled
Or even worse, she'll cast her curse, in dung you'll be defiled
The beatings she pounded into her lonely confused head
Would drain me of my energy while scratches formed and bled
At first I feared there was truth in every word they said
That I'd end up wishing I called in sick and stayed at home in bed
Yet something else entirely came over me while witnessing her pain
There was a gentle light emerging like a rainbow after years of rain
Demons once cloaked within my darkness were suddenly made plain
As all the fear I held so dear and fed my endless hate began to wane
The morning Ro-Ro tore away the blindfold from my eyes
I was reborn in angelic light that exposed my hopeless life of lies
All of the hatred I kept tucked beneath my falsely meek disguise
Escaped out of my bleeding heart and allowed my soul to rise
Stopped to eat two Egg-Mcmuffins along my un-merry way
Washed 'em down with diet Coke without a moment to delay
Driving to a job I hate because I've got too many bills to pay
When I arrived I learned it was my turn to watch over Satan's child
The little girl the nurses called the devil's spawn, untamable and wild
Be careful with that one, they warned, don't become beguiled
Or even worse, she'll cast her curse, in dung you'll be defiled
The beatings she pounded into her lonely confused head
Would drain me of my energy while scratches formed and bled
At first I feared there was truth in every word they said
That I'd end up wishing I called in sick and stayed at home in bed
Yet something else entirely came over me while witnessing her pain
There was a gentle light emerging like a rainbow after years of rain
Demons once cloaked within my darkness were suddenly made plain
As all the fear I held so dear and fed my endless hate began to wane
The morning Ro-Ro tore away the blindfold from my eyes
I was reborn in angelic light that exposed my hopeless life of lies
All of the hatred I kept tucked beneath my falsely meek disguise
Escaped out of my bleeding heart and allowed my soul to rise
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Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
21st Oct 2016 5:07pm
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21st Oct 2016 5:13pm
That was fast Brenda, thank you so much! I was just posting a note about other poems I have written for Ro. You are like lightning in the blink of an eye.
I was just about to read the poem you entered in that comp as well. I just noticed it when entering mine...
JJ
I was just about to read the poem you entered in that comp as well. I just noticed it when entering mine...
JJ
Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
21st Oct 2016 5:08pm
Entered in the comp "Angelic protector"
Also read "Ro-Ro Rows Her Boat" and my comments under that poem.
Also, my poem "Touch" relates to Ro-Ro...
JJ
Also read "Ro-Ro Rows Her Boat" and my comments under that poem.
Also, my poem "Touch" relates to Ro-Ro...
JJ
Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 5:18pm
This is so very touching.
Words which are expressed beautifully and felt deeply.
Great write 💓
Words which are expressed beautifully and felt deeply.
Great write 💓
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21st Oct 2016 6:25pm
Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
21st Oct 2016 5:22pm
It's amazing how those we try to help often help us. This was a great read, JJ. :)
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21st Oct 2016 6:29pm
Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
21st Oct 2016 6:06pm
I remember reading Ro Ro's story a year or so ago... so I'm quite familiar with the entity behind this ink and I must say, what a potent visual you've created for us, JJ. Being a woman that spent years working with children and adolescents with pervasive developmental disorders, I can appreciate this great ink. Thank you for sharing, babe...
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Re: Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
21st Oct 2016 6:23pm
Thank you my dear friend Tara! Your words mean so much to me! It warms my heart that you remember RoRo, she is always with my in my heart!
JJ
JJ
Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
21st Oct 2016 6:55pm
Re: Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
21st Oct 2016 7:07pm
Thanks for commenting es! More reading material in the comp... I will be sure to take a peak...
JJ
JJ
Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
21st Oct 2016 8:26pm
Wow!! This was a very deep piece..... Sometimes what is seen in others is truly a reflection in ourselves..... Great write.
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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21st Oct 2016 9:30pm
Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
21st Oct 2016 9:10pm
It takes a special kind to help us find that forgotton, hidden place within and you've expressed it pefectly...
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Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 4:45pm
A lovely sequal to Ro Ro Rows Her Boat! I love this as much as the first. Another beautiful reading as well jj! She obviously has seared her soul into your heart! H
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Re: Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
22nd Oct 2016 4:56pm
Thank you Heather, that was a wonderful comment! I also mention Ro in another of my older poems, called "Touch" that you might enjoy. I'm going to add a reading to that poem in the next day or two. Keep an ear out for it...
JJ
JJ
Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 5:22pm
It amazes me how people can label something as evil or wrong .. without ever finding out what is really wrong.
This touched me ... thank you JJ.
✨Trish
This touched me ... thank you JJ.
✨Trish
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Re: Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
22nd Oct 2016 8:33pm
Thank you for the heartwarming comment Trish! Seeing as how you were touched by this, you should read the other poem that relates to Ro called "Touch".
Re. an Angel's Wings Unfurled
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2016 3:05am
Hey JJ......what an exceptional piece this is........so enjoyed it my friend.........good luck in the comp.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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23rd Oct 2016 3:20am
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23rd Oct 2016 4:34am
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