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Breathe Into Me
breathe yourself into me
inhale my sweet scent
press your lips to mine
exhale into me from the bottom of your soul
make me feel the rush of your breath blow thru me
as the wind whirls our hot wild desires
same as my warm blood flows thru your veins
sigh over every inch of me
tease my breasts so luvingly
with the wetness of your tongue
as Angels tears flow from the heavens in awe
watching our sweet luv flow
make me feel the warmth of your luv
tips of your smooth fingertips glide across my curves
rub your salty lotion into my skin
want to feel your sexiness soak deep in my soul
my body is yours to explore
breathe new life into me
lick your passion across me
bathe me in your drip
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
inhale my sweet scent
press your lips to mine
exhale into me from the bottom of your soul
make me feel the rush of your breath blow thru me
as the wind whirls our hot wild desires
same as my warm blood flows thru your veins
sigh over every inch of me
tease my breasts so luvingly
with the wetness of your tongue
as Angels tears flow from the heavens in awe
watching our sweet luv flow
make me feel the warmth of your luv
tips of your smooth fingertips glide across my curves
rub your salty lotion into my skin
want to feel your sexiness soak deep in my soul
my body is yours to explore
breathe new life into me
lick your passion across me
bathe me in your drip
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 19th Oct 2016
| Edited 21st Oct 2016
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Okay! This one came out of the blue, at least it did to me. Not one to mince your words, I had no trouble understanding where this fine erotic write is coming from. If you just wrote these words to be writing them, or you are sending them to some lucky guy, you have given him a detailed map of where to travel over your body. I l-o-v-e that photo.
19th Oct 2016 5:32pm
Hey SG......now you know I write always with intentions in mind......LOL!! I just luv fingertip directions.......mmmmmmm......um......before I get carried away 😈 .......I'm glad you "l-o-v-e".......she definetly is hot.......thank you....purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Oct 2016 5:34pm
Hey Tri_ton......thank you stopping by my way.....glad you enjoyed.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
19th Oct 2016 5:22pm
I read this offline and immediately logged in to tell you how incredibly beautiful and evocative this is! Oh, Flower, this is a true beauty! :)
19th Oct 2016 5:35pm
Awe Willow......I'm so very honored indeed.......thank you for such special treatment........I'm so glad you enjoyed this.......I'm very touched.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
19th Oct 2016 5:32pm
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19th Oct 2016 5:37pm
Thank you EW.......you've made me smile.......I'm glad and very honored you like this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
19th Oct 2016 5:41pm
Beautiful Sun Kissed!!! Getting cooler temps outside here in NY but not inside with this steamy ink!!! *fannin MA'self here woman*
"tease my breasts so luvingly
with the wetness of your tongue"
*
"make me feel the warmth of your love
tips of your smooth fingertips glide across my curves
rub your salty lotion into my skin
want to feel your sexiness soak deep in my soul"
*
"bathe me in your drip"
~ goooooood lawwwwwwd!!!!
With love - Sweet S xo ;)
"tease my breasts so luvingly
with the wetness of your tongue"
*
"make me feel the warmth of your love
tips of your smooth fingertips glide across my curves
rub your salty lotion into my skin
want to feel your sexiness soak deep in my soul"
*
"bathe me in your drip"
~ goooooood lawwwwwwd!!!!
With love - Sweet S xo ;)
21st Oct 2016 00:34am
Hi Sweet S.....Ha! Now whose using up electricity.......LOL!! I'm honored that you've stopped by on this one.......you're unstoppable when it comes to erotic writes that are more than steaming HOT!! Thank you my precious friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Oct 2016 5:46pm
bathe me in your drip > beautiful last line to a wonderful poem!
Really enjoyed this one, flowergirl!
Really enjoyed this one, flowergirl!
21st Oct 2016 00:37am
Hey Duende.......I'm thrilled you enjoyed this piece........i thought that line was the perfect seductive ending.......LOL!! Thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
19th Oct 2016 6:43pm
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21st Oct 2016 00:49am
Hi Mortensa.......thank you for stopping by my page.......you're so right.......gotta luv those hot baths......mmmmmmm......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
19th Oct 2016 8:33pm
"sigh over every inch of me"
this captivates the epitome of desire..
beautiful from top to bottom,,
this captivates the epitome of desire..
beautiful from top to bottom,,
21st Oct 2016 00:52am
Hey Naajir........happy this captivated your desires.......it did mine too.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
This poem is sultry from start to finish. And the image you used for this piece helps with it too. A good piece through and through. Plus I loved the title of this piece (captures it perfectly).
21st Oct 2016 1:10am
Hi ES.......the pic is most definetely sexy........thrilled you enjoyed this all the way thru.......I picked the title casue I was breathing heavy when I finished this......LOL!! Thank you for your kind words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
19th Oct 2016 9:46pm
flower,
the purple heat you have generated with picture and words is one spark away from spontaneous purple combustion!
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
the purple heat you have generated with picture and words is one spark away from spontaneous purple combustion!
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
21st Oct 2016 1:12am
Hey Tor......happy that you enjoyed my purple heat......hope nothing you needed combusted......LOL!! Thank you for the fun words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Oct 2016 10:05pm
21st Oct 2016 2:19am
Hey Solomon.......so pleased to your smile upon my ink......happy you enjoyed......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Oct 2016 10:32pm
Such a turn on, Flower! Your eroticism is sweetly arousing, and the angels bearing witness is a nice touch. It's a blessing, not voyeurism. I love this blend of sensuality and spirituality:
make me feel the warmth of your love
tips of your smooth fingertips glide across my curves
rub your salty lotion into my skin
want to feel your sexiness soak deep in my soul
Fine work Flower! Your passion flows in every word...
make me feel the warmth of your love
tips of your smooth fingertips glide across my curves
rub your salty lotion into my skin
want to feel your sexiness soak deep in my soul
Fine work Flower! Your passion flows in every word...
21st Oct 2016 2:50am
Awe Crow......I'm blushing and luving it.......thank you so much for a turn on smile comment.......always blessed by your words........you always make me see more into my writes when you share your insights with me.......appreciate you much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Oct 2016 11:39pm
you are a farmer of poetry
every time you use soul
as a metaphor
I knew a guy who told me
he loved vanilla
and that was a metaphor
rich in multi flavour
gals and guys both sucked him
he was gay at times bi
another one wrote a similar poem
but that was like a patch of dry grass
around his crotch
your poetry is class
and all reading you shall in
swollen and silent erotica pass
every time you use soul
as a metaphor
I knew a guy who told me
he loved vanilla
and that was a metaphor
rich in multi flavour
gals and guys both sucked him
he was gay at times bi
another one wrote a similar poem
but that was like a patch of dry grass
around his crotch
your poetry is class
and all reading you shall in
swollen and silent erotica pass
21st Oct 2016 2:52am
Hey Again.....this is a wonderful response......thank you for such tender words of praise.....glad you enjoyed......honored by your words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
21st Oct 2016 11:48pm
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21st Oct 2016 2:55am
Hey PS....what a joy to see upon my ink......thank you for the like.....glad you enjoyed the last line........mmmmmm......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
20th Oct 2016 1:39am
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21st Oct 2016 3:09am
Hey Sista.......haha!! Guess if your going to wander back thru old times.....wet dripping ones are the best......mmmmmmmm......LOL!! Happy wandering......purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Oct 2016 12:38pm
From exchanging life through the passing of oxygen in a passionate kiss to quenching your thirst in each others desires, you burst with purple luv in every word of your sweet verse!
An absolutely beautiful sensuality exudes from your ink lovely flower...
JJ
An absolutely beautiful sensuality exudes from your ink lovely flower...
JJ
21st Oct 2016 3:15am
Awe JJ......you always have that way of making me smile......honored my your words.......thank you for uplifting my soul......glad it felt sensual......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
20th Oct 2016 2:44pm
O Flower! 💜
This is so very beautiful.
Sensuality drips wonderfully off of every word.
Absolutely love this passionate ink.
This is so very beautiful.
Sensuality drips wonderfully off of every word.
Absolutely love this passionate ink.
21st Oct 2016 3:18am
Hi Heart......what an honor coming from a talent such as you.......your pen is always sensual and luving.......thank you very much for your sweet word......purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Oct 2016 4:17pm
Very intense I love the format and Expressively cool style, It made me feel like staying and tasking a breather Bravo
21st Oct 2016 3:20am
Hi Divine......honored to have you visit my page......thank you for the "BRAVO"........thirlled you liked this one so much.....honored by the RL add on.......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
21st Oct 2016 3:12am
this is not my favourite genre but you wrote it so well, that for me is always the difference :-)
great stuff :-)
great stuff :-)
21st Oct 2016 3:23am
Welcome David my friend.......happy to see you.......tipping my pen to your generous words......very honored you read this one and took time to leave me words.......THANK YOU!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Oct 2016 3:02am
22nd Oct 2016 1:54pm
Hey Diamond......thank you very much.....always a pleasure to see your smile.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Oct 2016 10:26pm
24th Oct 2016 4:27am
Hey Sek......I was thinking about you earlier today.......I'm about to post a dark write soon requested by a friend.......thought of you......LOL!! Thank you smiling my ink once again......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
31st Oct 2016 00:05am
Breathtaking...love and connection truly felt within such elegance...
~ Áine
~ Áine
