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PANORAMA OF THE CITY
Throbbing and pulsating
Uncontrollable satyriasis
As you taunt me with a line drawn
From my temple to my phallus
My inhibitions are weakened
By the absinthe of your tongue
I yearn to devour your whole
While this night is still young
You are the masterpiece
Satin draped upon the velvet of your bust
A velvet damp with sweat and passion
Plucked flower in this garden of lust
I draw upon my cigarette
Elbows, the panorama of the city
And you would clutch me from behind
What have you done to me?
Published 18th Oct 2016
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5th Dec 2016 9:27am
This was very beautiful, sensual, and subtly sexy
However I think if you added more lines or at least done a little more to it,
It would be absolutely perfect.
But I'm not necessarily sayin' it has to be long just I feel there isn't enough detail.
However I think if you added more lines or at least done a little more to it,
It would be absolutely perfect.
But I'm not necessarily sayin' it has to be long just I feel there isn't enough detail.
5th Dec 2016 9:33am
Thank you. I might have, but this was actually for a competition with a length limit.
5th Dec 2016 9:42am
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