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Picking Up the Pieces
A poem for Kitty...
Sometimes when pieces of a puzzle get flipped upside down
they seem to fit where they don't belong
But stripping away the colors on both sides of the image
Can reveal deeper secrets you thought were long gone
There is nothing more real than intangible love
Climb out of the pit and leap to the one waiting above
Leave behind who you no longer desire to be
Reach for the dream you were never able to see
The beauty of being human is that there is nothing you can't do
Rise up to become the woman hidden deep inside of you
Let your gypsy break free from the bars of your broken life
To explore four new walls where love unveils a happy housewife
JJ
Sometimes when pieces of a puzzle get flipped upside down
they seem to fit where they don't belong
But stripping away the colors on both sides of the image
Can reveal deeper secrets you thought were long gone
There is nothing more real than intangible love
Climb out of the pit and leap to the one waiting above
Leave behind who you no longer desire to be
Reach for the dream you were never able to see
The beauty of being human is that there is nothing you can't do
Rise up to become the woman hidden deep inside of you
Let your gypsy break free from the bars of your broken life
To explore four new walls where love unveils a happy housewife
JJ
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Re. Picking Up the Pieces
13th Oct 2016 5:12pm
Re. Picking Up the Pieces
13th Oct 2016 6:22pm
So much beauty in this piece!
I especially loved this line:
"they seem to fit where they don't belong" > you never know how life will unfold...
There is something magic about a puzzle and its pieces and you described that very well!
I especially loved this line:
"they seem to fit where they don't belong" > you never know how life will unfold...
There is something magic about a puzzle and its pieces and you described that very well!
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Re: Re. Picking Up the Pieces
13th Oct 2016 7:12pm
Thank you Duende, though Kitty deserves credit for that. Check out her poem to see how it inspired mine.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/252073-rattling-the-cage/
JJ
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/252073-rattling-the-cage/
JJ
Re: Re. Picking Up the Pieces
14th Oct 2016 8:15am
Thank you for the link, I was already looking for that, but couldn't find it...
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Re. Picking Up the Pieces
13th Oct 2016 8:54pm
I love me sum Kitty, been awhile since we've sniffed one another's ink...but she has always been beautifully wise beyond her years. Love the inspiration in this ink, JJ.
"Rise up to become the woman hidden deep inside of you" <--- that's exactly what it will take to be able to stand strong and pick up the pieces....
"Rise up to become the woman hidden deep inside of you" <--- that's exactly what it will take to be able to stand strong and pick up the pieces....
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13th Oct 2016 9:07pm
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14th Oct 2016 10:56am
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14th Oct 2016 1:19pm
Thank you Kitty, and thank you for the inspiration! It does an old man's heart good to make you smile!
JJ
JJ
Re. Picking Up the Pieces
Anonymous
14th Oct 2016 1:18pm
What a lovely way to advise woman to not be restricted .. absolutely adore you, JJ
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Re: Re. Picking Up the Pieces
14th Oct 2016 1:25pm
Thank you Trish. I have lots of life experience full of forks in the road and somehow my forks all got mangled in a dishwasher with no moving parts...
Hmm, that sounds like a song, or perhaps my next poem...
Ya know, I'm sensing a mutual adoration thing happening here...
JJ
Hmm, that sounds like a song, or perhaps my next poem...
Ya know, I'm sensing a mutual adoration thing happening here...
JJ
Re. Picking Up the Pieces
15th Oct 2016 5:40am
Very amazing piece,climbing out of that pit is a difficult thing. I have to check out the poem that inspired it,of course and I truly enjoyed reading...
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Re: Re. Picking Up the Pieces
15th Oct 2016 11:23am
Thank you for commenting Kasai! Glad you like the poem and hope you like Kitty's as well!
JJ
JJ