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Drunk in love I want to live
I love; love
I may be a romantic but I really love the love's feeling
I dream with the perfect man for me and that man will believe
I am the perfect woman for him
I believe in other half, soulmates , promise land and all that people don't believe this days
I know that he is out there my Joshua my promise land.
He also believes that:
Faith - love and commitment is the fundación of a relationship
Where he is at?
I don't know, but I know he is coming my way
That I know and we will be happy forever and after
I may be a romantic but I really love the love's feeling
I dream with the perfect man for me and that man will believe
I am the perfect woman for him
I believe in other half, soulmates , promise land and all that people don't believe this days
I know that he is out there my Joshua my promise land.
He also believes that:
Faith - love and commitment is the fundación of a relationship
Where he is at?
I don't know, but I know he is coming my way
That I know and we will be happy forever and after
Published 13th Oct 2016
| Edited 6th Dec 2016
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13th Oct 2016 5:21am
1st Nov 2016 9:42pm
13th Oct 2016 6:08am
Echo John Feddeler. Like the picture of an envisaged future committed relationship as a promised land, and reference to Joshua - one of my Biblical war heroes.
The pic looks as if it's from a movie - is it? It captures what your poem says.
The pic looks as if it's from a movie - is it? It captures what your poem says.
1st Nov 2016 9:43pm
yeah buddy. Thanks for your comments and the poems my pictures inspires you to write about
18th Oct 2016 7:46pm
When you get up in it and hit that spot and begin cumming you will feel !Ike your in the promise land for sure. It depends in what position you wanna be in when you go? Lol
1st Nov 2016 9:44pm
in promise land any position is great. Is love that shit is like poisons our veins. Ultimate feeling.
