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Dreaming Thoughts
you're my first thought of my day
as I awaken from dreaming of you
darkness never seems dark as I close my eyes
seeing your smile behind my eyelids
how truly blessed in my wakening hours
just as I am in my slumber
warmly laying inside your hug
never am I alone with thoughts of you
while our spirits soar across waves
beautiful feeling of visualizing our lips embracing
how wonderful and sexy you are
you're that unexplainable gentle touch
across my skin which seems like a ghost
all I can do is smile knowing its you
it's your luving spirit reaching out to mine
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 12th Oct 2016
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12th Oct 2016 3:45am
Ahhh . . . Glad I saw this before I finally crashed and went to bed. What a lovely, lovely poem you have penned for a person which . . . makes you happy. This person you write about has to be one of the happiest person in the world, because you are a remarkable woman, and this person has to know that.
14th Oct 2016 3:56am
Awe my sacred friend.......your words bring happy tears to me......you give me so much encouragement.......He blesses my life for sure......thank you for being such a wonderful soul and friend to me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Oct 2016 4:43am
A beautiful love poem that feels like floating on a could wrapped in your warm embrace!
JJ
JJ
14th Oct 2016 3:58am
Awe JJ......you're such a romantic......thank you for beautiful words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Oct 2016 5:15am
15th Oct 2016 3:55am
Welcome to DU Trevin!! I'm thrilled you stopped upon my page......thank you...glad you enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Oct 2016 10:53am
This piece reads like the perfect definition of your title. :) well done flower! :)
15th Oct 2016 3:57am
Awe Poet.....you make me emotional and blush at the same time.....thank you my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Oct 2016 6:48pm
15th Oct 2016 3:59am
Hi 23.......thank you for smiling beautifully upon my ink.....happy you like it.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
12th Oct 2016 8:14pm
It`s fair to say that we all have those [dreaming thoughts] from time~to~time that which we carry through out the day while at the same time hoping that the feeling never ends ... and though we know it will because of the inevitability, it`s in that moment of having them in which we should truly feel grateful for ... beautiful ink, my Flower ... love you, Lady ... ~Devlin.
15th Oct 2016 4:04am
Awe Dev.....my precious friend......your words touch me very much......I luv dreaming and thinking about them all day long then look forward to the night again when I fantasize new ones......thank you for your gracious insight on this......much luv & many hugs to you xo :)
12th Oct 2016 9:39pm
soft sweet memory
of a person one sees
only in a dream
it so does seem
a wonderful touch
soft and serene
must he silkenness of Casmere be
alas
the poetry comes from the vision supreme
from a garden more lovely than Eden
he must be slumbering more
so he enjoys your silky love
all for sure
superb be his behaviour too
to let you know
he silently loves you
of a person one sees
only in a dream
it so does seem
a wonderful touch
soft and serene
must he silkenness of Casmere be
alas
the poetry comes from the vision supreme
from a garden more lovely than Eden
he must be slumbering more
so he enjoys your silky love
all for sure
superb be his behaviour too
to let you know
he silently loves you
15th Oct 2016 4:08am
Wow Again.....this is stunning......you definetly touched me with your sensitive words.......tipping my one to you in respect and graditude......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
13th Oct 2016 4:53am
"you're that explainable gentle touch
across my skin which seems like a ghost "
what beautiful imagery..
across my skin which seems like a ghost "
what beautiful imagery..
15th Oct 2016 4:11am
Hi Naajir......your words warm my heart.......thank for smiling upon my ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
13th Oct 2016 5:36am
Hmm wow! touching many in such a positive way............yeah thats right
15th Oct 2016 4:12am
My precious friend.......your words touch me in a positive way just as your friendship does......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Oct 2016 4:31pm
19th Oct 2016 5:16pm
Thank you DC for the blessing of reading it and sharing words with me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
