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Beauty of the empty space
.
Between the veil and the floor mat
where she remains with pale limbs akimbo,
the empty spaces, reminders of
leaves at the moment of their release
when they whisper their death poems to me.
Original mousework art by Jade Pandora on MSPaint.
Between the veil and the floor mat
where she remains with pale limbs akimbo,
the empty spaces, reminders of
leaves at the moment of their release
when they whisper their death poems to me.
Original mousework art by Jade Pandora on MSPaint.
Published 10th Oct 2016
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10th Oct 2016 12:43pm
Deep and lovely poem, you truly have a dark a beautiful soul Jade.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
10th Oct 2016 1:11pm
Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 1:43pm
Loved this, Jade. I love how you can write a few lines and express an entire experience. Loves malady..
✨Always peace Trish
✨Always peace Trish
10th Oct 2016 2:11pm
Thank you so much, my walking partner, dearest Trish. I'm grateful for your embrace of my humble craft.
with love,
Jade💫
👣👣
with love,
Jade💫
👣👣
Jade
Yes you Jade!
You've floored Al. This is haunting in it's delivery and solice. It's dauntingly beautiful in it's form and message and it is definately a favourite of mine.
Your imagery is breathtaking.
I can go on and on and on...
Love at you and your wonderful poem
Al-x-
Yes you Jade!
You've floored Al. This is haunting in it's delivery and solice. It's dauntingly beautiful in it's form and message and it is definately a favourite of mine.
Your imagery is breathtaking.
I can go on and on and on...
Love at you and your wonderful poem
Al-x-
10th Oct 2016 2:19pm
Oh my goodness, I'm overwhelmed, dear Al. Saying "thank you" doesn't seem enough. But I do thank you, for taking the time to visit with me, for your words, for the recommend...
this means a lot to me, you dear man.
always,
Jade x
this means a lot to me, you dear man.
always,
Jade x
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10th Oct 2016 1:51pm
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10th Oct 2016 1:58pm
10th Oct 2016 3:03pm
Why tomcat... you make me feel special with your compliment and your trilogy!
(purrsss... tell me more... via pm of course)
And thank you so much!
-'tig
(purrsss... tell me more... via pm of course)
And thank you so much!
-'tig
10th Oct 2016 5:55pm
I love that word akimbo. Jade, you've illustrated your depth of artistry with this piece. Lovely, intriguing image and wonderful poetry to match. Bravisima!
11th Oct 2016 1:23am
My grateful thanks to you, dear GW, for your generous reflections about my ink & art! I'm honored for your embrace...
ever
Jade💫
ever
Jade💫
Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 6:36pm
*beautiful* ... I`m spent ... ~xo, Devlin
11th Oct 2016 1:13am
10th Oct 2016 9:31pm
The empty space is where all the beauty of meaning lies.
Wonderful write, Jade.
Wonderful write, Jade.
11th Oct 2016 1:29am
Our dearest Ahavati, my thanks to you for your always gracious share and embrace of insight. Your appreciation is special to me.
ever
-Jade💫
ever
-Jade💫
11th Oct 2016 6:50am
Beautifully presented and expressed as ever - love the concise minimalist approach
11th Oct 2016 4:29pm
11th Oct 2016 7:23am
it's a sterling image, each leaf reciting a brief farewell poem
as they descend, where they form oneliness,
then loneliness...
as they descend, where they form oneliness,
then loneliness...
11th Oct 2016 4:30pm
12th Oct 2016 1:14am
Five very haunting lines and impressive art from you Jade. I wish I had the talent to supply my own visuals. I have to scavenge Google for as close to the right pic as I can find. Excellent poem and art with the personal touch,
Oh my, apologies for the lag in my reply, friend crowfly! My iPhone battery keeps dying out so I'm on the computer. I am in the hands of the Fates, but I shall give you my response now without fail!
First off, I can't thank you enough for the support and embrace of my craft that you always gift me with. Next, I tend to have a slight advantage when it comes to adding art of my own to some of my work because that's what I started out being before I wrote poetry: a "trad" artist. Then, I taught myself how to use a computer's mouse to draw/paint on something like MSPaint, practicing for years to improve and get to know that dinosaur of an application till I could make it "sing"... provided I was a good artist to begin with. And last but not least: I still scrounge the Internet as well to find what my meager skill cannot reproduce in my own way.
With my (always) appreciation for you taking the time to come visit, to read, and to comment. Your company is always enjoyed.
First off, I can't thank you enough for the support and embrace of my craft that you always gift me with. Next, I tend to have a slight advantage when it comes to adding art of my own to some of my work because that's what I started out being before I wrote poetry: a "trad" artist. Then, I taught myself how to use a computer's mouse to draw/paint on something like MSPaint, practicing for years to improve and get to know that dinosaur of an application till I could make it "sing"... provided I was a good artist to begin with. And last but not least: I still scrounge the Internet as well to find what my meager skill cannot reproduce in my own way.
With my (always) appreciation for you taking the time to come visit, to read, and to comment. Your company is always enjoyed.
