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The Pain Of Service
She feels the pain of service; deep inside
Her gut, as he thrusts in relentlessly;
She spread her arse cheeks earlier; divide
Their pallor and you'll surely find that she
Can show the inner darkness and the fall
From grace, that she's experienced of late;
She listens to his commands and will school
Her tightness to his hardness; "demonstrate
Subservience," he said; she'll recollect
Those words, as she surrenders to his need;
And feels the punch of prick as, when erect,
He drives in hard to fill her hole with seed;
And then pulls back and out to let her suck
His cock clean, as is wont after a fuck
Her gut, as he thrusts in relentlessly;
She spread her arse cheeks earlier; divide
Their pallor and you'll surely find that she
Can show the inner darkness and the fall
From grace, that she's experienced of late;
She listens to his commands and will school
Her tightness to his hardness; "demonstrate
Subservience," he said; she'll recollect
Those words, as she surrenders to his need;
And feels the punch of prick as, when erect,
He drives in hard to fill her hole with seed;
And then pulls back and out to let her suck
His cock clean, as is wont after a fuck
Published 7th Oct 2016
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7th Oct 2016 10:18pm
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8th Oct 2016 3:05pm
my my my.
from title to delivery
the ending...
erotically magnificent..
it's the authenticity
that screams out..
and this here really made me smile
"She listens to his commands and will school
Her tightness to his hardness; "demonstrate
Subservience,"
loved that play on the word school...
once an innocuous word now smeared
in ecstasy ..very nice..
from title to delivery
the ending...
erotically magnificent..
it's the authenticity
that screams out..
and this here really made me smile
"She listens to his commands and will school
Her tightness to his hardness; "demonstrate
Subservience,"
loved that play on the word school...
once an innocuous word now smeared
in ecstasy ..very nice..
8th Oct 2016 4:28pm
A girl must seek to do her best in these subservient circumstances - thank you for your supportive observations
