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Free Spirit
My path might be narrow
But my mind is free
Wherever I go
The vastness engulfs me
They all have my life mapped out
never giving me the benefit of doubt
But my mind wanders far
like a traveler searching for the north star
They all say take the plowed path
But I believe in a free mind
And despite difficulty there is truth that I shall find
I will trudge through rain
I will swim through the sea
I will not give up until I find me
Because my path may be narrow
But my mind is forever free!
But my mind is free
Wherever I go
The vastness engulfs me
They all have my life mapped out
never giving me the benefit of doubt
But my mind wanders far
like a traveler searching for the north star
They all say take the plowed path
But I believe in a free mind
And despite difficulty there is truth that I shall find
I will trudge through rain
I will swim through the sea
I will not give up until I find me
Because my path may be narrow
But my mind is forever free!
Published 6th Oct 2016
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6th Oct 2016 6:19pm
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20th Dec 2016 1:57am
You write your heart. Never stop doing this. Well read, well felt. Well liked.
Thanks for the spill D.
Thanks for the spill D.
20th Dec 2016 8:29pm
1st Apr 2017 5:20pm
Such an empowering poem!
I really like that the beginning and the ending were similar...
"I will not give up until I find me" > that makes two of us...
I really like that the beginning and the ending were similar...
"I will not give up until I find me" > that makes two of us...
3rd Apr 2017 3:25pm
Thank you dear poet! I have satisfaction in meeting fellow searchers like me.... Others on a mission to discover truth and authenticity. I greatly appreciate your kind words.
