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Poems zeroing in on absent-mindedness
Hidden behind a shield of shear invisibility
Protected from your own picayune opinions
on how it ought to be if it was all up to you
 
Insults blended in a mixing bowl with
raw ingredients tossed in the salad
Spineless snake spewing venom without a bite
Spitting on poetry with tasteless subjectivity
 
Anonymous and perhaps talentless too
Pulling me down to your point of view
Reaching down to your level in a bottomless pit
Yet I can admit when I've been tricked to a trip
 
Revenge is a treat when served extra sweet
But I share the blame, falling in my own ditch of defeat
Time to climb back up to the top of the heap
Leaving behind the pabulum of an pseudonymous creep
Written by Poetryman
Published | Edited 14th Feb 2017
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