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Dwell
blistered lust
dirty fingers
demonic rust
pain lingers
souls sold
flesh from bone
born cold
as fucking stone
ask yourself
do you matter?
no relevance
blood splatter
death rattle
hearts collapse
forced battle
total relapse
blackened grin
beginnings end
lethargic sin
a whirling wind
ask yourself
do you matter?
no relevance
blood splatter
fading light
passive night
rotten core
angelic whore
hellbent
sexually spent
tough road
ejected load
ask yourself
do you matter?
no relevance
blood splatter
can you sleep?
with anger
into deep
another stranger
cut from cloth
stained romance
endangered moth
sacrificial dance
just two steps
from hell!!
moving forward
yet we dwell!!
dirty fingers
demonic rust
pain lingers
souls sold
flesh from bone
born cold
as fucking stone
ask yourself
do you matter?
no relevance
blood splatter
death rattle
hearts collapse
forced battle
total relapse
blackened grin
beginnings end
lethargic sin
a whirling wind
ask yourself
do you matter?
no relevance
blood splatter
fading light
passive night
rotten core
angelic whore
hellbent
sexually spent
tough road
ejected load
ask yourself
do you matter?
no relevance
blood splatter
can you sleep?
with anger
into deep
another stranger
cut from cloth
stained romance
endangered moth
sacrificial dance
just two steps
from hell!!
moving forward
yet we dwell!!
Published 4th Oct 2016
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2016 11:50pm
Sir Diamond ... a flicker of flame shines somewhere in your darkness ... exceptional lines, exceptional rhyme ... all that is missing now is the band ... love to you ... ~Devlin
4th Oct 2016 11:58pm
Lady Devlin.. i agree i need a band.. maybe Hades, could play bass for me.. he's the master of rhyme.. i appreciate your support on this write.. i hadn't attempted lyrics, in a while.. thanks for the love..
Dave
Dave
4th Oct 2016 11:51pm
5th Oct 2016 00:05am
Hades.. brother in steel.. i appreciate the kind words.. after reading your work, i always want to attempt lyrics again.. i think you're the master of rhyming.. so if you say it's good i believe you.. i appreciate the add.. \m/
Dave
Dave
5th Oct 2016 00:33am
Trust me, brother. The rhyme is excellent and if we ever had the chance to jam together, well, you got your bass.
5th Oct 2016 1:16am
Hades.. cool.. like the poem i wrote a while back.. just need a drummer, and guitarist.. but for you to offer your bass playing is cool.. brothers in steel = the real deal.. \m/
Dave
Dave
5th Oct 2016 6:36pm
damn it Dave this came down on me like thunder with a resounding sound..
awesome sauce..
love Brenda
awesome sauce..
love Brenda
7th Oct 2016 10:28am
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