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love's madness
As
His Sun rose
He gave her a momentary glance
And it dawned on him
The meaning of this love's madness
...yes that was how he coined it
There was no other way he could brand this feeling
That twisted and turned insidiously inside of him
As Him and Her would excavate
Those 'other selves'
For even in their dreamscapes
She would be right beside him
As in all things
And their bonding would form
An outer shell
Smug and calloused to the rest of the world
For they were just only unto themselves
..considered what they have a must
As they shamelessly delved into a love
Reeking with narcissism
Carrying with it a deep seeded undercurrent
Constantly lurking
Beneath poor facsimiles of cultured behavior
Swelling in anticipation
Of its next torrential release...
And in the thick of the night
Its tide would rise
As the moon grew closer
And it would threaten to overwhelm
Yet he would readily stand at the helm
Of love's madness
And she with abandon would write
Of how he passionately recites his Soul
Telling of his deepest emotions
Dictating between her thighs
His voice resonating within her bones
And she would scribe this insatiable vibe
In vivid remembrance
With the fused aroma of their sweaty coitus
Loitering beneath her nose
He spoke
And she wrote religiously of their union
As they would perform nocturnal rituals
With their love's madness flowing
As freely as the bodily secretions they swam in...
The stroke of his penis
Inspiring the strokes of her pen
Her written word illuminated
By the guiding light of their lunar priestess
Chronicling their wantonness
As she him received unreservedly
Time and again
Between spread legs
Savoring every reenactment of his rhapsodies
Taking his seeker deeper and ever deeper
Into her undiscovered country
And together
They would selfishly indulge their
Own big bang theory
Amongst the milking of his silken threads
Into tapestry of she
As his ebb and her flow
Pulsed to the rhythm Siamese heartbeats
Contorting spines
Bending wills to the shape of this madness
And tears would fall unabashedly from her eyes
In honor of promises reconciled
From the depths of her chasm
Anointing his entire length in her shimmering essence
With the braille of he
Etched into her genetic memory
As she clawed at his back in a language
Of their own design
Marking him as forever hers.....
Published 2nd Oct 2016
| Edited 11th Mar 2017
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Anonymous
2nd Oct 2016 2:46am
Naaj....killing me....you're frickin killing me here....
"And their bonding would form
An outer shell
Smug and calloused to the rest of the world
For they were just only unto themselves
..considered what they have a must"
~ genius...pure genius...
*
"With their love's madness flowing
As freely as the bodily secretions they swam in...
The stroke of his penis
Inspiring the strokes of her pen
Her written word illuminated
By the guiding light of their lunar priestess
Chronicling their wantonness
As she him received unreservedly
Time and again
Between spread legs"
~ for the love of all that's holy
*
"Anointing his entire length in her shimmering essence
With the braille of he Etched into her genetic memory
As would she claw at his back in a language
Of their own design
Marking him as forever hers....."
I shall pray right now that when I hit "Add to Reading List" I won't be denied....
With love - Taryn xoxo
"And their bonding would form
An outer shell
Smug and calloused to the rest of the world
For they were just only unto themselves
..considered what they have a must"
~ genius...pure genius...
*
"With their love's madness flowing
As freely as the bodily secretions they swam in...
The stroke of his penis
Inspiring the strokes of her pen
Her written word illuminated
By the guiding light of their lunar priestess
Chronicling their wantonness
As she him received unreservedly
Time and again
Between spread legs"
~ for the love of all that's holy
*
"Anointing his entire length in her shimmering essence
With the braille of he Etched into her genetic memory
As would she claw at his back in a language
Of their own design
Marking him as forever hers....."
I shall pray right now that when I hit "Add to Reading List" I won't be denied....
With love - Taryn xoxo
2nd Oct 2016 3:22am
"From the depths of her chasm
Anointing his entire length in her shimmering essence
With the braille of he Etched into her genetic memory
As would she claw at his back in a language
Of their own design
Marking him as forever hers...."
THIS summed up, in my mind, the gist of this
well-written poem and written in, again, in my
mind, gutter language. You are a very visual
writer, and one I am becoming more and more
appreciative of.
Anointing his entire length in her shimmering essence
With the braille of he Etched into her genetic memory
As would she claw at his back in a language
Of their own design
Marking him as forever hers...."
THIS summed up, in my mind, the gist of this
well-written poem and written in, again, in my
mind, gutter language. You are a very visual
writer, and one I am becoming more and more
appreciative of.
2nd Oct 2016 3:40am
an interesting fusion of ideas here - pauses for thought - yes very interesting
2nd Oct 2016 4:17am
Love's madness or Love's brilliance?
This is an amazing piece filled with little jewels, to name a few:
Telling of his deepest emotions
Dictating between her thighs > love these lines, the word Dictating is just...
The stroke of his penis
Inspiring the strokes of her pen > so clever! The use of stroke in two ways and then that penis/pen(is)
As always I'm in awe of your talent! Thoroughly enjoyed your madness ;-)
This is an amazing piece filled with little jewels, to name a few:
Telling of his deepest emotions
Dictating between her thighs > love these lines, the word Dictating is just...
The stroke of his penis
Inspiring the strokes of her pen > so clever! The use of stroke in two ways and then that penis/pen(is)
As always I'm in awe of your talent! Thoroughly enjoyed your madness ;-)
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2016 12:45pm
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Anonymous
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2nd Oct 2016 5:28pm
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2nd Oct 2016 7:06pm
The poem, as well as the pic, could be described as a picture of passionate marital consummation.
2nd Oct 2016 8:19pm
An epic work. This one will cling to me all night long!
Luscious and gorgeous!
Bravo!
Luscious and gorgeous!
Bravo!
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2016 10:55pm
I can't find the words I want to use...this is exquisite :)
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 3:52am
Hot write Naajir.......mmmmmmmm....perfect night cap for me......enjoyed your sexiness here.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
...it's too damn late at night for me to be reading this sexy stuff, shit!
"Amongst the milking of his silken threads
Into tapestry of she
As his ebb and her flow
Pulsed to the rhythm Siamese heartbeats
Contorting spines
Bending wills to the shape of this madness " <--- yup, too late at night I tell ya! Dude, don't' make me....
"Amongst the milking of his silken threads
Into tapestry of she
As his ebb and her flow
Pulsed to the rhythm Siamese heartbeats
Contorting spines
Bending wills to the shape of this madness " <--- yup, too late at night I tell ya! Dude, don't' make me....
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 7:15pm
"As would she claw at his back in a language
Of their own design
Marking him as forever hers....."
My, my... divine Naajir.
✨Always Peace Trish
Of their own design
Marking him as forever hers....."
My, my... divine Naajir.
✨Always Peace Trish
4th Jan 2023 7:29pm
After rereading this, favourite group of lines:
Her written word illuminated
By the guiding light of their lunar priestess
Chronicling their wantonness
As she him received unreservedly
Time and again
Between spread legs
Savoring every reenactment of his rhapsodies
Taking his seeker deeper and ever deeper
Into her undiscovered country
Her written word illuminated
By the guiding light of their lunar priestess
Chronicling their wantonness
As she him received unreservedly
Time and again
Between spread legs
Savoring every reenactment of his rhapsodies
Taking his seeker deeper and ever deeper
Into her undiscovered country
23rd Aug 2023 7:24pm
Reread this again, I would add this to my favourite lines:
And together
They would selfishly indulge their
Own big bang theory [therein lies the regenerative origin of the human universe]
And together
They would selfishly indulge their
Own big bang theory [therein lies the regenerative origin of the human universe]
