Released~

my skin is on fire
craves for a wet douse of chilled facts
to slap truth in the face.
Position my thoughts back in a zone
where hungry eyes and thirsty lines
surrender to the lust of ink
and verbs slowly drip
like diaphoresis
on a southern summer’s eve.

I love this... the best poem I've read since the past week

and i will be here waiting for another confession instead :-)

Oh wow Da_kwesta....what a humbling comment to jump start my week. ;)
Big smile plaster on my face, thanks to you! Elated you enjoyed this enough to store it on your cyber shelf. Appreciate you greatly!

Pen Love~

What a creation, mental masturbation, loved the sensation, felt great elation

lol... I'm not sure my mind was going for anything sexual in this ink, but maybe my pen had another agenda. lol
*shrugs*...
 Thanks my sweet funnyman! I know you're busy, busy, busy...so I'm pleased to see you make an appearance. ;)

I suspect this luscious bit of beauty is going to be sauntering through my mind for days. Your writing is amazing!  :)
Willow

...well if it was entertaining enough to linger in your mind for a day or two, my work here is done. ;) lol...
Thank you Willow for a lovely comment....

My Dearest Rain,
   What a creation brought to life in
a way that only you can. Just enough to keep us waiting for more... You are such a tease, Ms. Rain. Thoroughly enjoyed the write as always.

Keith

Keith darlin', you always say the sweetest things about my little dull pen. I'm so thankful for your poetic-friendship. :)

A tease? Maybe just a little incy wincy bit. ;)

I must confess...your words have a certain effect on me. And I promise I did not mean that in the "pervy" way it came out. Lol...what I mean is that I don't believe you could ever produce an ink I wouldn't find captivating. Your ink is beyond mentally stimulating...the visuals...the word play...always entertaining. If I wasn't a fan before, I am most definitely one now. Amazing write love. 💋

LyricalT, my spicy sassy sista', your comment is what most writers want to hear/read. That their words had some type of effect on the reader, no matter the emotion. Your comment is such motivational material for me.  Girl, don't mess around and make me stalk you for more of those delicious replies. ;) Happy you're taking her home with ya. Thanks hon... :)

"Hidden sentiments and exposed inspirations
rooted deep beneath skin
flows from my pores
until adjectives develop into whores
determined to open their legs
in parchment-paper motels
leaking ink stains
of erotic prose
on sheets dried in dirty deeds
for those who read
and yearn for a need to be sated. "

whew!!..and there you go..again..hahaa

....lyrical majesty indeed..
yes ma'am!!

....well when I'm learning from you Naajir, you're bound to feel the flow.  
Oh wait, you didn't know your pen's skills have been my secret tutorial over the years?!  ;)  
Thanks handsome..

Oh Rain, your imagination can take me anywhere it wants to go...
I can feel your words musing my mind into bleeding more poetry.
Nobody writes it the way you do! Love this poem passionately...
JJ

Come along and ride on a fantastic voyage. ;) Oh darlin' you just make me mushy inside. I love when my words bring forth inspiration in you, JJ! Thanks so much sweety...

Excellent analogy, Rain. Kudos to both your imagination and pen; grounded or otherwise.

aww...thanks so much lovely lady! Means a lot coming from you Ahavati! :)

....and I love that poetic response you gave, OS! :) Beautiful!
Happy to see you're still hanging around dup. :) Thank you for listing her.

Rain this is one of the most sensual and sexy writes i've had the pleasure of reading in awhile..

love Brenda

Gosh Crim, thank you so much, though I swear I wasn't trying to go sensual in this ink. lol...
It seems to be what everyone thinks, and I'm quite fine with the lyrical love all the same. ;) Thank you beautiful!

absolutely gorgeous! your imagination can take anyone anywhere my love.
how you toy with words and bend them to your will!
it is for you that they are now whores. <3

Thank you love! I was attempting to do exactly that.... toy with words, flirt with verbs, make them sway in directions I see fit. At least that was my general idea.
"it is for you that they are now whores.' <--- I'm trying to pimp them out. ;)  <3

doing a bloody fine job at that my dear. <3

"Released..." So aptly named, becuz my dear you just 'released a
"Holy shit Bad Mamma Jamma" of ink!! my god woman were you trying to do give a 'Hard Attack!!??...'

Well...it worked like a charm! lol
Dopeness from the Reignin' Queen
Of sass, wit, class!! :)
of

....do you need a cigarette?!  lmao.... Your excitement is infectious Poe! I really wasn't going for erotic in this piece but dammit that's what's interpreted and I'm fond of the thoughts regardless.  :) Believe it or not, my muse was 'me and poetry merged'. :) Thank you sweets and pleased you decided to take her to bed. ha!

Dear Rain, you left me in awe with this piece!
This is a diamond wrapped in gold!

The imagery, the phrasing and the reference to writing/language is just outstanding!

You're such a talented poetess!
Pen bow to you, Duende

....all smiles because of your commentary, Duende. :)  The raw references and spicy nuances to writing was my goal all along. Poetry becoming an entity, speaking her emotions, even in a slightly slutty way. ;)

Thank you for the lovely comment and for taking her home with you.  

Wow, this was deep Ms Rain.  So eloquent and I understand it's meaning quite well.  Release that which lie inside and allow the thoughts to stain the canvas scarlet with your creative, erotic fire.  Thus are the things that liberate us all.

You know how I feel about this..............😏   #gettingback2darealu

I think my pen and my flesh were at a stand-off, due to my mental,... cause what I was trying to say came out 'confuzzled'. lmbo.. But yes indeed you seem to understand where I was trying to go, Archie. Thank you for penetrating my prose sweety. :)  
   
btw... Happy Birthday....... yes, I remembered....

A fine cathartic write, Rain.  You show a lady's restraint in polite company, but here you have a license to thrill.  I can't resist thinking of this one in Freudian terms, with that warden being your superego and the carnality your id.  Those hidden drives shall be released.  Fine read!

Well shit, I don't even have a response to your incredible and astute commentary.  You absolutely get me and this write. You deserve the Suave award. ;) Thank you Crow, I appreciate your words hun...

confess! and pardon some of those fantasies, lol, a beautiful poem bursting with emotion and artistry goddess...

There he is! ;) Thanks honey for showing that handsome face of yours on my page. Always a joy.....xo

I will start with the obvious, your flow and skills are profoundly,  insanely and wickedly brilliant. Second...mixed with the sexy Rain of exotic drenching...... You my dear leave us Drowning and gasping for the another dose of heavenly euphoric breaths whispering your name.

#sigh
Crushing on your comments, as always. You know just how to stir me, G! xo

Sonsista - yup you gone and done it again...

"
flows from my pores
until adjectives develop into whores
determined to open their legs
in parchment-paper motels
leaking ink stains
of erotic prose
on sheets dried in dirty deeds"

Amazing

With love - Lady T xoxo

Thank you sonsista, just trying to be like you when I grow up. ;)
Thank you for the pen love.....xo

firstly,
your profile pic is
fuckhawt
*ahem*
sapiosexual erotica
at its finest, rainy lady...
... your flow is phenomenal,
the metaphor bloody brilliant
& your diction is, as always,
so very authentic
loved this
xoxoxo

Thank you dancedoll!  Your comments always hug my bones and strengthen them. You are one of the best writers on dup and your praise always empower me.

.....and your fuckhawtness' transferred through my computer screen and attached it's energy to my skin. :)

Queen your poems are masterpieces

Oh wow! How sweet, I feel extra special FLC8! Thankya darlin'!
Happy to see a new face,.... belated welcome to dup. I'll be sure to check out some of your art soon. :)

To me Rain.. the imagination of ones creativity. Shows an exceptional grasp of a higher intellect. You my dear are genius.
✨Trish

...and you are correct dearest one. :)  Our creative juices flow with our intellectual stream Trish. We as writers broaden our imaginations every single time we pick up our pens.  Humbled! :)  

My beautiful Melia, you're always sprinkling pixie dust of the poetic kind on my page each time you visit, and I love the force it has on me. :) Thank you hon...xo

Rain.. i agree there is a sensual vibe.. but so much depth and insight of who you are.. truly brilliant..i enjoyed every line.. this belongs in my reading list.. thanks for sharing.. with love..



Dave

...your visits always brings such joy to my spirit, Dave! :) I appreciate you immensely, thanks luv, and I'm so happy you decided to keep her... xo

saw the 'no vacancy' sign at your motel
so I broke in, drawn by the allure of your poetical harlots;
your pen is ever seductive...

lol... I love it, I love it, I love it! John, when you show up you always have the most poetic responses. I just love seeing you at my front door. :) Thank You!

This is another beautiful piece. You are such an amazing writer and I admire your work. You definitely have a way with words and you play around with it all so well.

So sorry Im just now seeing this, eswaller. Thank you for the lovely comment. ❤

The descriptiveness was excellent. I love the flow of this.

Sensational!