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Cosmos
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I should,
would like to have studied,
paid more attention to
constellations
A cosmos of delights to
behold on a clear night
My sight unhindered
by cloud or thought
distance achievable
Love in my heart
I should,
would like to have studied,
paid more attention to
constellations
A cosmos of delights to
behold on a clear night
My sight unhindered
by cloud or thought
distance achievable
Love in my heart
Published 23rd Sep 2016
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23rd Sep 2016 6:39am
23rd Sep 2016 7:49am
23rd Sep 2016 10:02am
I am always blown away at even the thought of the cosmos. So much to learn. Also makes you think of how little we are to the bigger picture.
Great write Rose 🌹
Great write Rose 🌹
23rd Sep 2016 5:07pm
We are but micro particles in the scale of everything
Though sadly there are some micro particles that just want to kill kill kill and fuck everything up and make us live under the teachings of a fictitious god
Though personally I prefer a little choice as to how I live my life as a micro organism
Though sadly there are some micro particles that just want to kill kill kill and fuck everything up and make us live under the teachings of a fictitious god
Though personally I prefer a little choice as to how I live my life as a micro organism
23rd Sep 2016 5:51pm
Rose, why not now? There's still plenty of stars and plenty of time. The clear, dark night maybe the only obstacle to overcome. Wonderful write. Bravo!
23rd Sep 2016 7:44pm
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