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Elements: Fire 🔥
you give name to desire
symbol of presence of life
no culture that doesn't admire
your power of inflicting strife
the ultimate purifier
the ultimate pure: fire!
can't live too close to you
can't live opposed to you
a friend with immense strength
a friend at arm's length
© KDAmB 2016. All rights reserved
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Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
22nd Sep 2016 10:46pm
Super writing, KD, very much so. Love!
Like your poem it seems to be like a
merry-go-round that spins until you are dizzy,
Like your poem it seems to be like a
merry-go-round that spins until you are dizzy,
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Re: Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
22nd Sep 2016 10:50pm
Awwe..Jerry you humble me with your high praise for my kiddie scribbles. Thank You dear Friend!! muchobliged!
:-)
KDAmB
:-)
KDAmB
Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2016 00:56am
Truly love this, my friend 💓
So many things come to mind as I read it.
Great expression...and word choice.
Well done:)
So many things come to mind as I read it.
Great expression...and word choice.
Well done:)
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Re: Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 1:00am
Welcome my dear friend. I thank you sincerely for your kind gesture. Mine scribble is no way as intense as the fire your ink witholds!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re: Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2016 2:05am
I beg to differ.
A beautiful heart and mind, in which your words greatly reflect. 💓
A beautiful heart and mind, in which your words greatly reflect. 💓
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Re: Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 2:07am
I told you before... the lamp which sheds lights everywhere doesn't look at it's own base... your humility is more than admirable my friend!! :-)
Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 4:38am
Your write brings to mind many of those things that we cannot live with and cannot live without.
Enjoyed this write.
Keith
Enjoyed this write.
Keith
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Re: Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 5:07am
Thank You once again dear friend Keith! ever so glad you enjoyed my little scribble. Appreciate the encouragement for I do not have much to contribute cept these bland scribbles. Much obliged Sir!
Warm regards
KDAmB
Warm regards
KDAmB
Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 5:10am
Re: Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 5:15am
awwe my gracious friend Brenda! Welcome and a major Thank You for your visit and graceful feedback! Honored to say the least!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 8:53am
Beautiful scribe of the flame,
the natural purification
and enrichment it gives...
its power and ferocity
Very important
for the carbon exchange of life.
The symbol,
it's picture perfect 🔥
the natural purification
and enrichment it gives...
its power and ferocity
Very important
for the carbon exchange of life.
The symbol,
it's picture perfect 🔥
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Re: Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 8:47pm
Welcome Pishashee!
I thank you for your beautiful feedback and insight! couldn't agree more!!
regards
KDAmB
I thank you for your beautiful feedback and insight! couldn't agree more!!
regards
KDAmB
Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 12:59pm
Re: Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
23rd Sep 2016 8:48pm
you made my day bro with your presence and such kind feedback!! Thank You so very much Cheesa!!!
Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
14th Oct 2016 3:46pm
Purifier = pure fire is one of those things that will just stick in my mind forever :)
Thankyou for the genius :)
Thankyou for the genius :)
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Re: Re. Elements: Fire 🔥
14th Oct 2016 4:50pm
Humbled by your high praise Kaileah! Welcome and Thank you once again!
Cheers
KDAmB
Cheers
KDAmB