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SHE SAID YES
Going out was a success;
My girl was such a temptress.
After our date she said "Yes!"
We started with a caress,
Reducing to nakedness.
Our night passed with noisiness
As we worked off lust's excess
Applying my manliness
Deep within her wet recess.
We awoke a sticky mess.
My girl was such a temptress.
After our date she said "Yes!"
We started with a caress,
Reducing to nakedness.
Our night passed with noisiness
As we worked off lust's excess
Applying my manliness
Deep within her wet recess.
We awoke a sticky mess.
Published 22nd Sep 2016
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23rd Sep 2016 00:20am
23rd Sep 2016 10:28pm
Unbelievable! 72 reads and 1 comment, now there
are 2 comments. Love this "erotic" poem very much
because you refused to use the word fuck. You
managed to get your point across very visible, and I
liked it very much.
are 2 comments. Love this "erotic" poem very much
because you refused to use the word fuck. You
managed to get your point across very visible, and I
liked it very much.
24th Sep 2016 00:09am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
24th Sep 2016 1:18am
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