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Dandelion

Love is precious
until
and it scatters
upon the wind
like a dandelion.

Written by shadow_starzzz

Published 21st Sep 2016

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JohnFeddeler

21st Sep 2016 6:34am

written on the wind, like a delicate flower;
& your poem, just as delicate...

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SweetOblivion

21st Sep 2016 8:21am

True - very true - only too true

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Kasai

21st Sep 2016 9:17am

As all precious things are.
Beautiful poetry...

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Anonymous

21st Sep 2016 12:49pm

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tbutterfly12 (Talitha Rae)

21st Sep 2016 6:17pm

Short and sweet.

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TMA (Apollo)

21st Sep 2016 11:11pm

It always does seem to scatter doesn't it

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Poetikmind (_---_)

24th Sep 2016 5:14pm

Well I wanted you to say more, but you did say was absolutely outstanding!! nice work my dear :)

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Soxy (SoxThePoet)

4th Nov 2016 11:10am

how can a few words explain so much.interesting write

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