Surrender

Thank you MusicallyMrM for being the catalyst...

my pleasure.......this writing too has a myriad of beautiful layers (lest I read more into the conversation) ;-)
#doubleentendre

this is such sweet and passionate surrender lovely Duende..

so beautiful..

love Crim

Thank you so much, lovely Crim!

You always make me smile with your comments :-)

Love, Duende

Oh so beautiful 😁 Loved all of it.

Thank you so much!

Also for the reading list entry... I feel honored :-)

I love the piece 💓
Letting down of walls, revealing layers and heart....a total surrender, with a dominant claim.
Very nice passionate write.

Thank you so much, lovely Heart!

Glad to hear you love this piece!
I really appreciate your comments ♥

you already know how much i
enjoy the manner in which you format
your words Duende, which adds to
the depths and the meaning of this vibe
as it comes across ever so fluidly
just lovely..

Thank you so much, Naajir!

I know that you enjoy how I format my poetry... I'm so happy someone likes that :-)
Glad to hear your feel the depths of this one, I really appreciate you!

Surrendering to need is the purest form of awakening. :) Lovely ink, Duende...

Thank you so much, Rain!'

I agree: the purest form of awakeing...

"....When I talk like this when I tear me apart
When I raise my voice I break my heart
But if I gave it all let the wall come down
Would you take my hand would you show me how

Take it easy on me ".  Beth Hart

Surrendering oneself to the one who holds your heart and soul and knowing that it won't be taken lightly or taken advantage of .......feeling safe in it's assumption.  Ahh that level faith is orgasmic.  Can only be found in that word " MINE ". It's discovery is as Rain said, "the purest form of awakening" It is as beautiful as this gorgeous ink that you have spilled here. Duende, I feel every word.  :-)

Ahh, you quoted Beth Hart! That makes me smile :-)

Thanks for your wonderful comment and yes: MINE is the key...

Glad that you could feel my words!

There is a softness and quiet in this piece that I found engaging. However, I do find the whispers being in all-caps a little disconcerting, because it seems contradictory to the peaceful feeling in the rest of your poem.

Thank you for your comment... your sharp view is appreciated!

As you already know... I understand your feedback and will consider a change :-)

This will do it every time...

"while you whisper    
in silence the    
only word    
I need    
   
Mine"

Enjoyed this delightful scribe!

With love - Taryn xoxo

Thank you so much for your comment!

Glad to hear you enjoyed it :-)

Love, Duende

wonderful
Yes we must surrender to what is here and now and must let go of what no longer is

Thanks for your comment!

Letting go is indeed an underlying theme of the poem...

Ah, my Beautiful, Deunde ... such a poetic storm ... your mind is one of sensual & thought provoking ... it has made me wonder ... love to you, Lady ... ~Devlin.

Lady Devlin, thank you for your amazing comment!

Sensual and thought provoking... you flattered my mind :-)

Love, Duende

Hi Duende........such a beautiful write.......peacefulness and calmness came over me reading this.......tipping my pen to you in respect and admiration of your talent......purple luv & hugs xo :)

Thank you so much!

You make me blush with such a beautiful comment...
Glad to hear my write brought you peacefulness and calmness!

Purple love, Duende

"Mine..." Aaaahhh let me rewind...
remind myself of the sweetness of your wine...I whine as I done the thought alone, diggin' into your depths wishin'
to cum home, diggin' with the big bone
I'd dine, n' feel content if you were mine... :)

Ahh, you made me a poem... you just made my day!
 
Thanks Poetik, your comments always bring a smile on my face :-)

Ur welcome beautiful :)