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Elecktrysticy......( The New Gothika ) Pt. 2
.....the uncontrolled trembling
of her shapely legs
I ain't so proud
to drop down
upon my knees
begging
to taste
thigh-thickness
spreading wide
and that
sweet
golden
honey
begins
to drip down inside......
…..her swollen labia, I pinch between my fingertips
hips upon
the grind
nostrils flared,
I am a beast in heat
loosing
my
religion....
….beautiful slave,
bowed in submission,
I bury myself
deep inside
the fertile delta
of those baby-making
thighs
….am I being crass?
Wet lips,
tongues dance
pulling her naked body
on top of mine
my mind in a trance
gently biting
her shoulder
again
I
smack the
taut, golden flesh
of her ass
my obsession...
"….terrify me
with your devil eyes
bury my soul in your soil
burn my heart in your hell
cut me open with your knife
paint your body with my blood..."
our sexual electricity,
like a severed fuse
caught up
in a wave of
vulvanic,
titanic
eruptions...
...with reckless abandon
thrusting myself
so deep inside ,
behind her back
hands tied
the darkness of
your wet abyss
summoning
the raw pleasures
of sweet submission-
the beautiful pain
in the hands
of this powerful,
mahogany
man
fucking
you
into
insanity.....
...face down upon
the floor
the screams of
my wanton lover
calling for more
Electricity
"......modify me
with your magical hands
tear me apart and dismantle me
beat the fear out of me and break me
till there is nothing left but my naked soul
laid bare for you to unravel and recreate me
mystify me
with your eloquent words
rip me apart and make me yours
fuck me, devour me and enchant me
with your tongue, your hands and your cock
but more so with words from your deviant mind.....
......see me, free me and heal me
make me feel safe and protected
and I will thank you for finally revealing
the girl who has been hiding for far too long"
"......master, smack my ass....please" 💋
"......See me, feel me, touch me, heal me
See me, feel me, touch me, heal me
Listening to you I get the music
Gazing at you I get the heat
Following you I climb the mountain
I get excitement at your feet” Roger Daultry and The Who
Published 17th Sep 2016
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17th Sep 2016 6:51pm
Splitting this up.......that was lengthy 😥 My flow of consciousness was definitely on "erotic overdrive" #baskinginuberpleasures
17th Sep 2016 7:02pm
Sorry to bring you the bad news, but this was lenghty as well ;-)
Normally I have trouble with reading long poems, but with yours... not at all!
Besides that: you left my favorite part out :-(
Now go get a cold shower! ~winks~
Normally I have trouble with reading long poems, but with yours... not at all!
Besides that: you left my favorite part out :-(
Now go get a cold shower! ~winks~
17th Sep 2016 7:19pm
......getting a good one while washing the cars under sunny, Carolina skies LOL
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6a8MRbHf5pA a fav from my playlist
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6a8MRbHf5pA a fav from my playlist
I know that song! Such a beautiful and soulful song, thank you for bringing her back :-)
Completely looked over the picture the first time (???) but damn... I love it! Could be me...
P.S. Apparently I also looked over my favorite part #wherewasmymind
Completely looked over the picture the first time (???) but damn... I love it! Could be me...
P.S. Apparently I also looked over my favorite part #wherewasmymind
17th Sep 2016 7:03pm
I haven't read part pt but DAMN!!! Mr.Mmmmm I wanna her right about now. I love pleasure filled pain essence that you have created. Very sensual ink!
17th Sep 2016 7:21pm
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19th Sep 2016 1:15am
Amazing visual effects in this erotic ink Music,... enthralling and enchanting
19th Sep 2016 4:30am
and I appreciate your comment (coming a sister as prolific a writer as you are) Thank you dear
