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the literary terms flow across seas
reaching broken
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � hearts
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � minds

those flowing with Life yet
�continually told to dissipate dreams
� �aimed at creating better worlds than here
� � � pursuing tales thought to be lost in time

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � for what other roads lead to wonder
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � than by building them upon
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � foundations set in hopes
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �of imagination

carved away by greed stricken mentality
gripped by material illusion �
distorted features unwilling to see logical reason
willfully ignorant in pursuits to desecrate Nature
betting unto apathetic mindsets educated to ignore
materialistic appetite

� � � � how long will this charade continue?

� � � � when will you realize?

�human devices can only last �
in physical indulgence wasted
and in so long as sights are blinded
do few gain from compliance

Written by schizodude

(a voice from the void)

Published 13th Sep 2016 | Edited 18th Sep 2016

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Anonymous

13th Sep 2016 1:36pm

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schizodude (a voice from the void)

18th Sep 2016 8:02pm

appreciate your thoughts of praise thank you

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MsRockyJackson

15th Sep 2016 9:46am

Great poem schizo, as usual your poems never disappoint however may I suggest is that your spacing is a little too much and that you may need to fix that.
Other than that the write itself is brilliant.
Well done :)

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