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Silence The Voices
whiskey and rye
lonely times
writing songs
never heard
cigarette burns
on the floor
blues guitar
some delta slide
one man party
looking for lies
in empty bottles
it’s deja-vu
sexy redhead
on the screen
my latest
porno fantasy
dick in hand
at 7:00 a.m.
i love her
till i cum
dream time
is over
hot shower
born again
sliding into
dirty jeans
can’t find
my fucking keys
in the car
breath mints
can’t hide
last night
drive thru
greasy tex-mex
force it
down
two vodka
shooters
music blasting
drunken anthems
liquor store
stocking up
for another
all nighter
life is crazy
far from normal
when you’re out
to silence the voices..
lonely times
writing songs
never heard
cigarette burns
on the floor
blues guitar
some delta slide
one man party
looking for lies
in empty bottles
it’s deja-vu
sexy redhead
on the screen
my latest
porno fantasy
dick in hand
at 7:00 a.m.
i love her
till i cum
dream time
is over
hot shower
born again
sliding into
dirty jeans
can’t find
my fucking keys
in the car
breath mints
can’t hide
last night
drive thru
greasy tex-mex
force it
down
two vodka
shooters
music blasting
drunken anthems
liquor store
stocking up
for another
all nighter
life is crazy
far from normal
when you’re out
to silence the voices..
Published 10th Sep 2016
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Anonymous
10th Sep 2016 6:06pm
Such intense expression.
You take us on a ride for certain.
Diving into your thoughts, lust, and meltdown.
Brilliant delivery...in such few words.
True talent. 💓
You take us on a ride for certain.
Diving into your thoughts, lust, and meltdown.
Brilliant delivery...in such few words.
True talent. 💓
10th Sep 2016 7:38pm
Within.. i'm glad you liked it.. i appreciate the love, and kind words... much respect to you..
Dave
Dave
10th Sep 2016 7:49pm
Brenda.. thank you so much.. i just attacked how i felt today.. it came out good.. i appreciate the kind words lovely one.. love you!!!
Dave
Dave
10th Sep 2016 10:00pm
11th Sep 2016 00:14am
10th Sep 2016 11:05pm
11th Sep 2016 00:17am
Sara.. thank you so much.. i appreciate your kind words.. didn't mean to make you sad.. but glad you enjoyed...
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
11th Sep 2016 00:37am
Sir Diamond. . .*AWESOME*. . .Now this is my kind of poetry. . .Fast, and to the fucking point!. . .love to you. . .~xo, Devlin.
`fingers in cunt
at 7:00 a.m.
i love him
till i cum
dream time
is over
hot shower
born again` <----------I can relate, so I improvised;)
Lady Devlin.. i'm so glad you approve.. means the world to me.. love to you as well.. am honored to make your reading list..
Dave
Dave
11th Sep 2016 1:00am
11th Sep 2016 2:02am
Thanks my lovely, Mysterious... so honored by your love, and continued support.. love you..
Dave
Dave
14th Sep 2016 00:40am
Anonymous
12th Sep 2016 1:14am
My brother!!! WOW!! This has to be one of the easiest reads I have experienced with you....somehow my brain was able to continue the ride, perhaps because of not being forced to stop at each capital letter.....there were none!!! Damned aspergers! ;) I was there with you...each word seen so vividly...wonderful!
Love to you
xoxo Taryn
Love to you
xoxo Taryn
12th Sep 2016 1:23am
Taryn.. my sister.. your kind words are so appreciated.. i think at 41, i'm entering the peak of my poetic powers.. i don't why it just started clicking.. and i'm not gonna question it.. i love you!!
Dave
Dave
