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Oceans Blue I love You Still
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Cross the sea being blue;
remembered by death note parchment quill
oceans for colours,
browns and greens together
seeing golden horizons,
and the I love you still.
When I be in recess,
unsuppressed of thought process;
I am all that I wanna say.
on the soul train tomorrow;
Many will cease the traveling today,
Salute and curtsey;
give up a velvet seat to the religious overseer,
A tip of the black hat to the non believer
those stuck in the middle
a wry smile
Those that unbeknownst,
down to the last thousand beats;
For they have lived rich lives
poor lives, through the mill
experiencing touch to taste,
ground coffee and early mornings
Being blue and saying I love you still.
Cross the sea being blue;
remembered by death note parchment quill
oceans for colours,
browns and greens together
seeing golden horizons,
and the I love you still.
When I be in recess,
unsuppressed of thought process;
I am all that I wanna say.
on the soul train tomorrow;
Many will cease the traveling today,
Salute and curtsey;
give up a velvet seat to the religious overseer,
A tip of the black hat to the non believer
those stuck in the middle
a wry smile
Those that unbeknownst,
down to the last thousand beats;
For they have lived rich lives
poor lives, through the mill
experiencing touch to taste,
ground coffee and early mornings
Being blue and saying I love you still.
Published 6th Sep 2016
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6th Sep 2016 8:06pm
So deep and made me rather sad. It's hard to think of death. Hopefully there is a better life for us in the afterlife 😁
6th Sep 2016 8:20pm
It's about how equal we all are in this life
Be it poor or rich
How equal we are in death
We should all really just live in harmony
Being thankful that we are soo very lucky
to be given this opportunity to live
There's nothing after death
Least it's never been proven otherwise
ooOOH RL add too thankyou xD
Be it poor or rich
How equal we are in death
We should all really just live in harmony
Being thankful that we are soo very lucky
to be given this opportunity to live
There's nothing after death
Least it's never been proven otherwise
ooOOH RL add too thankyou xD
7th Sep 2016 7:45am
Life is a gift. What comes next I welcome. Just being able to have the life I had is awesome in itself.
7th Sep 2016 4:22pm
yep couldn't agree more
not about being the best you can be
just being able to smile and be happy
happiness breeds happiness :)
just a shame as a species some can't seem to do that
would rather go kill everyone in the name of misguided beliefs
then what they going to do?
he ain't gonna materialize and say yes indeed I am great..
not about being the best you can be
just being able to smile and be happy
happiness breeds happiness :)
just a shame as a species some can't seem to do that
would rather go kill everyone in the name of misguided beliefs
then what they going to do?
he ain't gonna materialize and say yes indeed I am great..
