~poisonous pain~

Spectacular imagery and deeply expressed. A bit scary and sad but buzzing with inner strength. Like a warning sign on posted lands that you will be shot and devoured by guard dogs if you trespass on private property...
JJ

thank you JJ though I'm feeling mostly sadness at the moment my fierce cloak has gotten lost somewhere in my closet..

love Brenda

shattering, Crim.
the artwork reminds me of Ophilia...

thank you John..

love Crim

thank you lovely Amelia..

love Crim

This one actually breathes with emotion, there is great strength in it as well.  
Willow

thank you beautiful Willow for seeing me as strong when I feel weak..

love Crim

Take heart in the fact that there is strength in admitting weakness also.  You are stronger than you think.  And more beautiful in your soul than you believe.  Let the poison bleed out.  :)

thank you beautiful one :)

love Crim

I must agree that you are on a "rise and fall of my dark beauty,"
just hoping the fall, when it comes, will not be so severe that you
are unable to climb from that dark pit, in case you really want to.

I'm sober Jerry so there's that the craving I've expressed is just that no more..

this write is about grief and how I deal with it through anger..

love Brenda

Thank you for setting me straight on your poem, Brenda. I am happier now.

I'm glad Jerry your being happy for me put a smile on my face :)

love Brenda

Amazing expression...beautiful Crim. 💓
Full of emotion and deeper inner strength.

thank you graciously lovely Heart..

love Crim

Power in your pen, my Queen of Darkness. . .love to you. . .~Devlin.

thank you my Queen of Darkness love you lady :)

love Brenda

Love this piece, dear Crim!

I could feel your pain and anger in these beautiful words! The imagery is very powerful!

Poppies... my favorite flowers :-)
Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende for feeling me on this write..

love Crim

Fascinating work!  You change personas and faces but the pain's still there.  Still, you haven't lost one iota of your dark beauty Lady Crim.

thank you Sir Crow for seeing the dark beauty in my many facets..

love Crim

thank you most kindly..

love Crim

Score  

Love

You

Xo

thank you dearest Poet you made my week :)

love you..

xo Brenda

"witness the rise and fall of my dark beauty
as it undulates and changes faces
masking a dull ache"

I love those lines. Many times I feel like I have to put on a mask for people.

Great write Crim

thank you DC for relating to this write..

love Crim

Brenda.. this is so brilliantly beautiful.. i love the contrast, between this and "Disturbed".. you're on a roll.. between the light and dark.. you can summon either at command.. that is a gift, lovely one.. and you're a goddess of both.. i love you!!



Dave

thank you so much Dave you made my day :)

love Brenda