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Sounds of Love Making
The sound of my body crashing down onto yours
Hands smacking my ass…echoing behind closed doors
Handcuffs…lust’s accessory
Clinking against the headboard…a beautiful melody
The base of the bed sliding back and forth across the floor
Gripping you tighter as neighbors bang on walls and yell at the door
Mouth dry from calling your name
As you patiently love me…gradually driving me insane
Slurping sounds as you pull away from my lips
Sounds of my moist grip….clutching as you insert and remove the tip
From my ever flowing passion coating your raw desire
The sound of you enjoying my love…adding flame to the fire
Ooh’s and Ahh’s announce my approaching explosion
Bed springs squeak from the increased commotion
Searching for the words to properly verbalize my affection
Intrigued by the view of our entangled reflection
The bed frame creaks…nails trace skin…climax soon to emerge
You thrust deeper…Muscles spasm, but no surrender…as our souls merge
It’s definitely one of the most gratifying results
A phenomenal orgasm shared by experienced adults
Hopefully one day you too will share this immense pleasure
All sexual cravings fulfilled at once….a rare treasure
Written by
Lyrical_Temptation
Published 1st Sep 2016
| Edited 5th Sep 2016
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Re. Sounds of Love Making
1st Sep 2016 1:06am
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1st Sep 2016 1:35am
Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am
1st Sep 2016 1:54am
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Re: Re. Sounds of Love Making
1st Sep 2016 2:31am
Thanks sweetheart. So glad that you could envision my vision. Lol 💋💋💋
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"Hopefully you too..." Yea no lie
It'd be an absolute dream CUM true
Lol...very very hot n loaded with explosive passion, u effing rock my beauty! :)
It'd be an absolute dream CUM true
Lol...very very hot n loaded with explosive passion, u effing rock my beauty! :)
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Re: Re. Sounds of Love Making
1st Sep 2016 2:34am
Who is to say that it won't indeed "cum" true! Thank you for the read love and your continued support. You are amazing my dear!!! 💋💋💋
Re. Sounds of Love Making
1st Sep 2016 2:36am
Really fun. All the sounds that you could think of in one spot. Great write.
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1st Sep 2016 3:34am
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1st Sep 2016 3:19am
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1st Sep 2016 4:04am
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Re: Re. Sounds of Love Making
1st Sep 2016 1:06pm
Thank you my love!!! It's just a teaser for the 2 I plan to post this week. I think you'll be pleasantly pleased with the others. I will be posting 1 called distant lover...inspired by you. 💋💋💋 Hopefully it will leave a smile on your face. 💋💋💋👅💋💋💋
Re. Sounds of Love Making
".....Mouth dry from calling your name
As you patiently love me…gradually driving me insane
Slurping sounds as you pull away from my lips
Sounds of my moist grip….clutching as you insert and remove the tip
From my ever flowing passion coating your raw desire
The sound of you enjoying my love…adding flame to the fire "
I am so amazed at the way you are able to capture this dynamic of sensual lovemaking. The way you've captured and described the lust-filled sounds, the acts-the motions, the sensations, the feel and in turn you've made *me* feel as though I've made love to you. Damn, this left me with a feeling as though we've "phucked" each other divinely. I'm sure every other reader can feel the urgency of the sexual energy as well. A powerful, brilliant mind-sex fantasy in but a few choice colorful words. I have tried to come close to capturing this feeling in my ink but this is perfect love. You're making me wish that I could "cum" discreetly across state lines and see if this is real. Marvelous ink pretty one, : )
As you patiently love me…gradually driving me insane
Slurping sounds as you pull away from my lips
Sounds of my moist grip….clutching as you insert and remove the tip
From my ever flowing passion coating your raw desire
The sound of you enjoying my love…adding flame to the fire "
I am so amazed at the way you are able to capture this dynamic of sensual lovemaking. The way you've captured and described the lust-filled sounds, the acts-the motions, the sensations, the feel and in turn you've made *me* feel as though I've made love to you. Damn, this left me with a feeling as though we've "phucked" each other divinely. I'm sure every other reader can feel the urgency of the sexual energy as well. A powerful, brilliant mind-sex fantasy in but a few choice colorful words. I have tried to come close to capturing this feeling in my ink but this is perfect love. You're making me wish that I could "cum" discreetly across state lines and see if this is real. Marvelous ink pretty one, : )
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Re: Re. Sounds of Love Making
1st Sep 2016 1:11pm
Wow...mission complete! I am glad that my write truly served it's purpose love. Making love to your mind...a pleasure in itself!!! And trust...it is real...and I have so much more to offer than just the sounds alone. 💋💋💋
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1st Sep 2016 12:43pm
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Re. Sounds of Love Making
1st Sep 2016 11:19pm
whew!!!
such intense
and visceral
visuals!!!
ya'll wore that poor 'ol
bed frame out...
....and this right here
really piqued the senses
"Slurping sounds as you pull away from my lips
Sounds of my moist grip….clutching as you insert and remove the tip
From my ever flowing passion coating your raw desire "
yes ma'am!!
such intense
and visceral
visuals!!!
ya'll wore that poor 'ol
bed frame out...
....and this right here
really piqued the senses
"Slurping sounds as you pull away from my lips
Sounds of my moist grip….clutching as you insert and remove the tip
From my ever flowing passion coating your raw desire "
yes ma'am!!
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Re. Sounds of Love Making
11th Sep 2016 4:49am
"The bed frame creaks…nails trace skin…climax soon to emerge
You thrust deeper…Muscles spasm, but no surrender…as our souls merge
It’s definitely one of the most gratifying results
A phenomenal orgasm shared by experienced adults
Hopefully one day you too will share this immense pleasure
All sexual cravings fulfilled at once….a rare treasure"
Oh my goodness! I captured all of this in a moment. Dope ink!
You thrust deeper…Muscles spasm, but no surrender…as our souls merge
It’s definitely one of the most gratifying results
A phenomenal orgasm shared by experienced adults
Hopefully one day you too will share this immense pleasure
All sexual cravings fulfilled at once….a rare treasure"
Oh my goodness! I captured all of this in a moment. Dope ink!
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11th Sep 2016 4:59am