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xxThe Human Element xx
I am the Vitruvian
the paradigm,
I shift the course
of man
Sexagisimal ,
the great pyramids
a mere fractal
of who I am,
physically
spiritually
sexually....
...thus the human element
inside of me
the pentagram
spread five points
across the galaxy
upon the hot desert sands
water upon thy left hand
the air upon my right
my head,
the temple of my erotic spirit
the right foot earth's anchor
and thy left, fire and light
holding the keys to
the souls pleasures
my golden proportion,
108 degrees of separation
lustful fires
burn deep inside
your brazen core
metaphysical penetration
ethereal bodies screaming.....
…...more
my lyrical queen, Aphrodite
sitting high upon thy mount
her fires smolder deep inside
she is my temptress ,
her body begins a
long, slow descent
her voice, in seductive lament
as I disappear inside
the sanctity
of her luscious thighs
her movements like a symphony
she causes my fountain to rise
Insatiable is my Peitho,
my princess of persuasion and seduction
extrovert , pure and physical
encompassing my spirit
the waters of her lips spread
like healing ointment
across the broad expanse of my lips
wetly, they drip...
….tongue be the sword
that pierces her core
forcing her
rose hips
to rotate my earth
my eros heart cries out
for more
our trinity
a beautiful seductive ode
to “you, me and she”
the taste and feel of
seduction and lust
this rich, violet-colored triangle
belonging only to us
Orgasmic...
….a sensual madness
linking us
no beginning
no end
infinity.....
…..the human element
inside of three.
Published 26th Aug 2016
| Edited 27th Aug 2016
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26th Aug 2016 8:26pm
Very epic. Almost like this takes place fixed in the cosmos. Very unique.
26th Aug 2016 8:39pm
Well thank you for the observation. Some of societies greatest erotic treatise has taken place in Greek mythology. #iamafan
26th Aug 2016 9:16pm
As I read the first half of the poem I had a mental picture of an interpretation of Da Vinci's 'Vitruvius Man'. Favourite verses:
she is my temptress ,
her body begins a
long, slow descent
her voice, in seductive lament
as I disappear inside
the sanctity
of her luscious thighs
her movements like a symphony
she causes my fountain to rise
….tongue be the sword
that pierces her core
forcing her
rose hips
to rotate my earth
my eros heart cries out
for more
she is my temptress ,
her body begins a
long, slow descent
her voice, in seductive lament
as I disappear inside
the sanctity
of her luscious thighs
her movements like a symphony
she causes my fountain to rise
….tongue be the sword
that pierces her core
forcing her
rose hips
to rotate my earth
my eros heart cries out
for more
29th Aug 2016 4:01pm
king Solomon, I an humbled that you picked up on those cues. DaVinici's Vitruvian indeed 😊
30th Aug 2016 5:57am
I note the half-hid caption at the top of this version - Mount Vitruvius (as she is doing!)
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27th Aug 2016 3:55am
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29th Aug 2016 4:05pm
....and I thank you for the same in return. You in part inspired this work. Your spirit is so nymph-like and exotic. You are sensual yet so youthful. You happen to have fit quite well into this mythical triangle. Aw if we could truly live vicariously through words and dreams 😊
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29th Aug 2016 5:06pm
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30th Aug 2016 1:36pm
"my golden proportion,
108 degrees of separation
lustful fires
burn deep inside
your brazen core
metaphysical penetration
ethereal bodies screaming..."
Whew!!! 🔥 Well sir if anyone ever says that you don't have a way with words, they're a damn lie!!! Lol...I "hands down" love this in every way. This definitely made my morning. Everyone needs someone to tempt and please them to no end. Awesome, amazing...seduction at it's finest love. 💋💋💋
Much love,
LT
108 degrees of separation
lustful fires
burn deep inside
your brazen core
metaphysical penetration
ethereal bodies screaming..."
Whew!!! 🔥 Well sir if anyone ever says that you don't have a way with words, they're a damn lie!!! Lol...I "hands down" love this in every way. This definitely made my morning. Everyone needs someone to tempt and please them to no end. Awesome, amazing...seduction at it's finest love. 💋💋💋
Much love,
LT
