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Give Me Pain
pain is pleasure
its real
its raw
its honest
pain can cut deep
can leave burns
and dreams
that float around you in your sleep
pain can comfort
pain comes in many forms
some more welcoming than others
pain can be as simple as
"yes, sir"
and as intense as
"no, sir"
but whats beautiful about pain
the degree
the height
the form
demands to be felt
its real
its raw
its honest
pain can cut deep
can leave burns
and dreams
that float around you in your sleep
pain can comfort
pain comes in many forms
some more welcoming than others
pain can be as simple as
"yes, sir"
and as intense as
"no, sir"
but whats beautiful about pain
the degree
the height
the form
demands to be felt
Published 26th Aug 2016
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26th Aug 2016 2:27am
It's been a while since i wrote one about pain. I've learned a lot since then. But, pain has made me who i am. So, maybe it's time i should pay it some gratitude. Thanks for the inspiration. Holler if you want to spit ideas back and forth. I'm always game for learning from other creative minds. Welcome back to DUP.
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