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If Only I Could......
if only I could step inside your heart
physically feel every beat thru mine
kiss you from within yourself
slosh around in your warm passionate blood
showering me with luv with every beat
how sensual it would feel being covered in you
feeling every vibration when you breathe
inhaling together the sweet aroma of us
a fragrant purple rose forever in bloom
be the happy tears your heart bleeds
to be able to feel every emotion you do
when our bodies make sweet erotic luv
if only I could be a lingering tear on your lash
sensation of you tasting me as I drip upon your lips
as you lick and swallow me back into you
embrace you from inside out when passion comes
feeling and knowing exactly what you secretly desire
hugging your heart eternally for eternity
if only I could......
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
physically feel every beat thru mine
kiss you from within yourself
slosh around in your warm passionate blood
showering me with luv with every beat
how sensual it would feel being covered in you
feeling every vibration when you breathe
inhaling together the sweet aroma of us
a fragrant purple rose forever in bloom
be the happy tears your heart bleeds
to be able to feel every emotion you do
when our bodies make sweet erotic luv
if only I could be a lingering tear on your lash
sensation of you tasting me as I drip upon your lips
as you lick and swallow me back into you
embrace you from inside out when passion comes
feeling and knowing exactly what you secretly desire
hugging your heart eternally for eternity
if only I could......
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 17th Aug 2016
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17th Aug 2016 2:13am
17th Aug 2016 3:48am
I'm so happy DC you liked the visual......this was wonderful to write.......appreciate you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2016 4:31am
17th Aug 2016 4:37am
Awe DC......what sweet words you say.....I luv being nice to nice people.......so thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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17th Aug 2016 2:14am
Sweet Flower....this is so very beautiful. 💓
Your longing and true desire drops off of every word.
The depth of love so potent.
I have read and reread this portion...several times. ❤️
"if only I could be a lingering tear on your lash
sensation of you tasting me as I drip upon your lips
as you lick and swallow me back into you"
I have complete adoration of this ink.
Your longing and true desire drops off of every word.
The depth of love so potent.
I have read and reread this portion...several times. ❤️
"if only I could be a lingering tear on your lash
sensation of you tasting me as I drip upon your lips
as you lick and swallow me back into you"
I have complete adoration of this ink.
17th Aug 2016 3:52am
Precious Heart.......such honorable words coming from a talent as you is more than touching to me......those lines were the last ones that came to me.......I'm glad I fit them in......thrilled you enjoyed this......you've made my night......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2016 2:15am
your love poetry is lovely its harmonically vibratory any one who knows you flowery will melt into you and your blood as you say enter in his heart there is only one way if he is a man then I can say enter his heart though his stomach again knows it well as there is no other way today nor was there one yesterday nor ever will it change for tomorrow I still say love resides in eyes alone and the path by now to you is known soft poetry you have taught me believe me a poet you have transformed of a potter like me
17th Aug 2016 3:55am
Again.....I'm humbled by your words......they are very encouraging......thirlled my ink has made an effect.......I write my words as I feel them within me......appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
the purplicity of life is to help others overcome strife be one a hubby or wife let poetry be the soothsayer all want to see let poetry be lovely as much as flowery there are many flowers in the garden but only one rose i can see hahahaaa got you this time that's me flowery
20th Aug 2016 5:53pm
Hey Again....yes you did.....LOL!! Thank you for your words.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2016 2:16am
Oh my goodness, flower. If there ever was a love poem this is it.
You broke the mold and went straight for the overwhelming feeling
of being completely saturated within the one you love. FANtastic!
You broke the mold and went straight for the overwhelming feeling
of being completely saturated within the one you love. FANtastic!
17th Aug 2016 4:26am
Wow SG.......you have touched my emotions deep within with your words.......thrilled my words conveyed just how I wanted my ink to feel to those who I'm so honored to have read me and take the time to comment.......thank you for the smiles you bring upon my page......purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2016 3:28am
o'honey you just know how
to speak souls and hearts,
I could really learn a lot from
you..
this is so beautifully, gosh ok
I have tear peeking at the
world right now..
feels like a warming shroud
or blanket.
-Howlings
to speak souls and hearts,
I could really learn a lot from
you..
this is so beautifully, gosh ok
I have tear peeking at the
world right now..
feels like a warming shroud
or blanket.
-Howlings
17th Aug 2016 4:01am
Howling my precious friend......I believe I'm learning from you......you're such an awesome talent......for you to leave me such words is an honor.......thank you......with tender tears as well I send you purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2016 4:31am
This is a beautifully written piece. I can feel all the emotions coming out. A good write. Thanks for sharing.
17th Aug 2016 4:41am
HI E......I'm so happy you felt the emotions in this ink......I had a beautiful feeling inside me while I wrote this one......thank you for your smile upon my page.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2016 11:29am
lovely Flower I find myself carried away by the true beauty and passion of this write :)
love Crim
love Crim
18th Aug 2016 2:17am
Precious Crim.......you always make me smile.......you give me such encouragement to keep writing......I'm glad that it touched and you felt the passion......it was a wdnefful feeling to write it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2016 12:05pm
Beautiful piece I love the imagery and you can really feel the emotions it written with :)
18th Aug 2016 2:19am
Think you 23......you always bring warmth upon my page......glad you felt the emotions......truly felt from my within my soul......appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2016 4:41pm
18th Aug 2016 3:04am
There you are my sweet friend Kavik.......thank you for the thoughts......good to see you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
With apologies to Frank Sinatra, this could be titled "I want to be under your skin". I could imagine the accompanying pic as an animated cartoon following the beat of a song like 'I've got you under my skin'.
18th Aug 2016 3:05am
Hey Solomon......another great song.......you know your music that's for sure.......thank you for sharing your thoughts with me......always appreciate you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Aug 2016 00:23am
I love your wishful thinking and unfailing sweetness Flower. This desire to feel your man from the inside seems kind of brave to me. I think I'd get lost if I was internalized by some of the beauties here or elsewhere. I'd stay lost 'til the end of my days.....
19th Aug 2016 3:28am
Yes Crow....to be lost inside another soul you luv would be awesome......to feel them completely all the time......sigh......thank you for your tender words.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Aug 2016 6:22am
20th Aug 2016 5:54pm
Thank you UL for visiting my page.......I'm glad you enjoyed my ink.....appreciate you smiling upon it.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Aug 2016 5:15pm
hehe .... u bring out something i have never heard never read ...... its fabulous in terms of its own innovation .... am happy having read this.... bravo dear....it was awesome..
20th Aug 2016 5:56pm
Awe MH.......you have made my heart flutter with your words.......thank you so much.......I'm speechless......sending you luv & hugs from my heart to yours......truly thank you xo :)
