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What You Mean To Me Dear Benji <3
Words can not describe my feelings for you.
You can always make my cheeks
Burn an incredible bright red.
I realize youre truly the
Only person I ever really loved.
Youre there for me, you care.
Means so much to me,
That youre here.
I cannot thank you enough.
But when your troubled or down,
Ill always help you and
Make sure you get through
The rough times and youre
Still standing strong.
I love you, and Ill be here
For you, as you are for me <3
You can always make my cheeks
Burn an incredible bright red.
I realize youre truly the
Only person I ever really loved.
Youre there for me, you care.
Means so much to me,
That youre here.
I cannot thank you enough.
But when your troubled or down,
Ill always help you and
Make sure you get through
The rough times and youre
Still standing strong.
I love you, and Ill be here
For you, as you are for me <3
Published 24th Jul 2011
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24th Jul 2011 8:43am
24th Jul 2011 8:46am
<3
when i told you what you meant to me
a few hours ago i decided to make it into
a poem for you. thats the shorter version. theres still more to come <3
when i told you what you meant to me
a few hours ago i decided to make it into
a poem for you. thats the shorter version. theres still more to come <3
24th Jul 2011 9:49am
24th Jul 2011 10:35pm
2nd Aug 2011 00:05am
It stops and starts so suddenly that I feel like it was being spoken by William Shatner. Needs to be more fluid to really work.
8th Aug 2011 2:51pm
hush child. it wasnt meant to rhyme. and i wrote it the way it was supposed to be. thanks for the advice but im quite happy with the way it is right now :)
28th Aug 2011 6:25pm
not all poems have to rhyme and this is an awesome poem. i like how its not exactly flowing very easily if you were to say it but it has a huge meaning and it kinda flows that way. its fantastic.
