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Someone or someone's?
i'd rather be someone's
than someone
that someone who's larger than life
in love with
the limelight
the attention
the following
and at the same time
hollow
pursuit of abstract is foolish
and perfection is an abstract term
i'd rather be someone
than someone's
that someone who is in love
with himself
in awe of himself
in awe of his own grandeur
that when I put my feelings across
his angle is
"how and where does it affect me"
than to care about my feelings
or empathise.
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Re. Someone or someone's?
Anonymous
12th Aug 2016 00:47am
Another powerful write.
Full of truth and wisdom.
Pride is only something which will eventually cause one to fall, at some point in life.
I would much rather be the one full of humility, sitting in the corner.
For there is where I find great comfort.
Beautifully expressed 💓
Full of truth and wisdom.
Pride is only something which will eventually cause one to fall, at some point in life.
I would much rather be the one full of humility, sitting in the corner.
For there is where I find great comfort.
Beautifully expressed 💓
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Re: Re. Someone or someone's?
12th Aug 2016 00:50am
" Pride is only something which will eventually cause one to fall, at some point in life.
I would much rather be the one full of humility, sitting in the corner.
For there is where I find great comfort. "
WTH, my friend, thank you for honoring my page with another beautiful poem... the one which I've quoted above-part of your comment! Thank You!!
I would much rather be the one full of humility, sitting in the corner.
For there is where I find great comfort. "
WTH, my friend, thank you for honoring my page with another beautiful poem... the one which I've quoted above-part of your comment! Thank You!!
Re. Someone or someone's?
Anonymous
12th Aug 2016 2:10am
And, oh, to be someone's someone when they're your someone, too. It's good to know what's really important. Nice write.
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Re: Re. Someone or someone's?
12th Aug 2016 9:29am
Welcome MarieKeys! I thank you for your kind words and appreciate your keen insight.
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Someone or someone's?
12th Aug 2016 4:20am
Ahh my friend, how I empathise and relate to how you feel. I never could stomach being a somebody, rather than someone's. It gets very lonely after the limelight is put to bed and you're left on your own.
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Re: Re. Someone or someone's?
12th Aug 2016 9:31am
Welcome dear endless friend! I appreciate your empathy and your spot-on insight! True very true-it does get lonely when they're left on their own after the limelight is put to bed!
regards
KDAmB
regards
KDAmB
Re: Re. Someone or someone's?
12th Aug 2016 9:32am
Cheesa! bro you humble me with your kindness. no words enough to thank You bro!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Someone or someone's?
12th Aug 2016 9:31am
KDAmB this poem resonated with it's wisdom I know I'm guilty of pride..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Someone or someone's?
12th Aug 2016 9:35am
I welcome both you and your kind feedback Brenda! I beg to disagree, the only thing you're guilty of from what I've witnessed here on DU is honesty! and I treasure that trait!
respect and regards
KDAmB
respect and regards
KDAmB
Re. Someone or someone's?
24th Aug 2016 6:56am
someone or someone's?
hmmm...both, in varying degrees with the intent of balance
...the sum of one
...be someone you like (live well) and be your own someone's (love well)
thank you for igniting great ponderings once again!
hmmm...both, in varying degrees with the intent of balance
...the sum of one
...be someone you like (live well) and be your own someone's (love well)
thank you for igniting great ponderings once again!
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Re: Re. Someone or someone's?
25th Aug 2016 11:14pm
You hit the nail on it's head LR!! appreciate your keen insight immensely ...both these goals get obscured out of sight so easily by us humans..living and loving well.... most of the times they get chucked into a deep well with no bottom..
Thank you for gracing my scribble LR! appreciate your kind words!
:-)
Thank you for gracing my scribble LR! appreciate your kind words!
:-)