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A Little Piece of Peace
Lilies and daffodils
I just wanna run through a field
Grass under feet
Sun illuminating the sky
With its rays of sunshine
I wanna twirl
Head to sky
While listening to music
Feel the beat pulse through me
I just wanna run free
Let the wind carry me away
To a place where burdens are light
Happiness is constant
Peace your best friend
And where true love never dies
I just want a little piece of heaven
Right here on earth
~Bsavvy 8/10/16
I just wanna run through a field
Grass under feet
Sun illuminating the sky
With its rays of sunshine
I wanna twirl
Head to sky
While listening to music
Feel the beat pulse through me
I just wanna run free
Let the wind carry me away
To a place where burdens are light
Happiness is constant
Peace your best friend
And where true love never dies
I just want a little piece of heaven
Right here on earth
~Bsavvy 8/10/16
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Re. A Little Piece of Peace
10th Aug 2016 5:51pm
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10th Aug 2016 5:58pm
Re. A Little Piece of Peace
Anonymous
10th Aug 2016 6:04pm
A beautiful ...visual piece. 💓
Ah...just to have those moments, if only briefly.
Something which to embrace.
Ah...just to have those moments, if only briefly.
Something which to embrace.
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Re: Re. A Little Piece of Peace
10th Aug 2016 6:06pm
Exactly!!! When you close your eyes real tight imagination kicks in and transports you to that very place lol.... Something to embrace indeed... Thanks my honey....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. A Little Piece of Peace
Ah, As I was reading your great poem I was saying the words
to an old Bob Seager song, "Old Time Rock 'n Roll." What you
were wishing for was happiness, peace and good feelings.
I hope you get them.
to an old Bob Seager song, "Old Time Rock 'n Roll." What you
were wishing for was happiness, peace and good feelings.
I hope you get them.
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Re: Re. A Little Piece of Peace
10th Aug 2016 8:35pm
LOL... now I hear the song in my head haha!!!! Just writing it gave me good feelings... :0)
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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10th Aug 2016 8:36pm
awww, I'm so glad it did..... You're welcome and thank you Crim.... :0)
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. A Little Piece of Peace
10th Aug 2016 11:24pm
You know what's so ironic? So much of what we wanna believe heaven to be is manifested in our earthly states of being, n peace is in the top five things we relate to heaven :)
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Re: Re. A Little Piece of Peace
11th Aug 2016 4:08pm
I totally agree..... We intuitively know..... And so we continue to yearn and search for it to be back with that feeling.... Always a pleasure having you grace my page...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. A Little Piece of Peace
11th Aug 2016 7:02am
Definitely a place i'd love to be... your words really float across the soul B...
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Re: Re. A Little Piece of Peace
11th Aug 2016 4:08pm
Thanks Naajir, as always such a pleasure seeing you around my parts of town... lol....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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11th Aug 2016 1:19pm
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Anonymous
12th Aug 2016 3:13am
BSavvy.......I'm ao luvin this......what a great visual of a perfect peaceful day......RL for me......outstanding happy ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. A Little Piece of Peace
12th Aug 2016 4:02pm
Thank you purple one...... Glad you were able to visualize it and transport yourself to that happy place.... Hugs...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. A Little Piece of Peace
12th Aug 2016 5:28pm
There are no other words
to express that hasn't been
already..
so.. .if you do not mind, im
just going to ly in that field
above and receive the
beautiful peace you are
sharing here.
Merci my honey, muchly need'd.
-Howlings
to express that hasn't been
already..
so.. .if you do not mind, im
just going to ly in that field
above and receive the
beautiful peace you are
sharing here.
Merci my honey, muchly need'd.
-Howlings
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12th Aug 2016 6:31pm
LOL..... Yes hunny, lay out and chill awhile, soak up a little piece of peace.... Hugs...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. A Little Piece of Peace
12th Aug 2016 9:18pm
This read like like a tranquil sigh..truly enjoyed the lovely imagery..excellent exhale!!
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18th Aug 2016 6:06pm
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Re: Re. A Little Piece of Peace
18th Aug 2016 8:48pm
I thank you for such an incredible comment because I definitely don't take my writings as brilliant no where near, but I appreciate it all the same. It doesn't matter if you think you write brilliant or not that is the beautiful thing about poetry. Different styles, for me the main thing is just write what you feel and allow your readers to see what you see and feel what you feel and that is what makes it as you say "brilliant." Well I look forward to reading it when you post it... If you are like me then we enjoy visiting this peaceful place in our mind and so I can't wait to visit yours. You are so welcome to enjoy mine as well.... Thank you again for yoru comment I appreciate it...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. A Little Piece of Peace
What lovely sanguine ink! The vibe is light and charming. I love positive energy poems...
Beautiful imagery, BSavvy! Waiting on new ink... :) xo
Beautiful imagery, BSavvy! Waiting on new ink... :) xo
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6th Oct 2016 4:03pm
Thank you Rain....... Hopefully sometime soon my pen will start moving.... I've been slacking I know.... I need to play catch up on the reading as well, I haven't been around much lately.... Hugs...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy