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~poetic love~
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let my tenderness
rain down on you
sweet cherry blossoms
in the spring
*
walking parallel paths
separately we sojourn
yet as one
I am by your side
on the cold nights
*
aching that I'm not meant
to see you face to face
though we've touched
delving into each other's souls
deeper than any ocean
*
knowing my sweet aroma
that lingers on the breeze
tasting your gentle fierceness
arousing a side of me not yet seen
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love of self
something that alluded me
in the dark times
*
even then
you saw beauty in my rough edges
fascinated by my brokenness
you helped me pick up the pieces
*
shards of glass
catching the summer light
reflecting hope
*
some day I will see your face
for now i'll adorn myself
in your poetry
dance in the shade of your art
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Re. ~poetic love~
7th Aug 2016 6:15pm
Poetry never gives up on us.
It is always with us writing of
the beauty even from the ugliness
of our choices, because those, too
are parts of who we become.
There is hope in Spring as there
is through Winter's cold.
Lovely write, Brenda.
It is always with us writing of
the beauty even from the ugliness
of our choices, because those, too
are parts of who we become.
There is hope in Spring as there
is through Winter's cold.
Lovely write, Brenda.
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8th Aug 2016 2:56am
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7th Aug 2016 6:26pm
Oh my, you've done it again Crim!
This is such a delicious piece of ink, love it! ♥
Love, Duende
This is such a delicious piece of ink, love it! ♥
Love, Duende
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8th Aug 2016 2:56am
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7th Aug 2016 6:47pm
Beautiful Brenda,
As always you amaze and awe
so effortless you can convey the depth and colors of emotion.
I am thankful and feel truly gifted to read the beauty here on display.
Keith
As always you amaze and awe
so effortless you can convey the depth and colors of emotion.
I am thankful and feel truly gifted to read the beauty here on display.
Keith
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8th Aug 2016 2:57am
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7th Aug 2016 6:48pm
such a glowing ink Brenda...enchanting at times...the honesty and the beauty of it are simply brilliant beyond words... when you write from the heart it shows...and it glows!!
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8th Aug 2016 2:58am
thank you KDAmB for seeing beauty in this heart of mine and in my writes :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2016 6:58pm
My Beautiful Brenda, this simply takes my breath away....a most gorgeous profession of love with words perfectly coupled together. We are all so blessed to bare witness to such creations....I would have to copy and paste this whole thing down in here....
I love you so very much eternal lovely one
xoxoxoxo Love Taryn
I love you so very much eternal lovely one
xoxoxoxo Love Taryn
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8th Aug 2016 3:00am
thank you my beautiful one for being on this journey with me I am ever grateful for your love and presence..
I love you :)
xo Brenda
I love you :)
xo Brenda
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2016 7:02pm
Delicate and tender...Beautiful notes Brenda, its nice to see your beauty shine in peacefulness.
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8th Aug 2016 3:01am
thank you lovely Rina trying to tap into the ether and what lies deep underneath the tough exterior..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~poetic love~
7th Aug 2016 7:24pm
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8th Aug 2016 3:01am
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2016 8:06pm
A truly breathtaking piece.
You paint a beautiful enchanting picture with your words. 💓
Lovely ink.
You paint a beautiful enchanting picture with your words. 💓
Lovely ink.
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8th Aug 2016 3:02am
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7th Aug 2016 8:27pm
I have someone like that, these two lines are very special . . .
"tasting your gentle fierceness / arousing a side of me not yet seen"
"tasting your gentle fierceness / arousing a side of me not yet seen"
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8th Aug 2016 3:03am
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2016 8:48pm
Brenda.. simply brilliant, and beautiful.. i love this, and i love you..
Dave
Dave
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8th Aug 2016 3:03am
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Aug 2016 4:11am
8th Aug 2016 1:47am
Beautiful Crim......pic is gorgeous and your words make it even more so........your write is outstanding......visual is awesome......feeling of calmness.....luv.....peacefulness all in one......luving this......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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8th Aug 2016 3:04am
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8th Aug 2016 7:39am
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8th Aug 2016 10:27am
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8th Aug 2016 10:27am
Re. ~poetic love~
8th Aug 2016 12:27pm
such a beautiful piece, I found myself lost in your descriptions almost like I was playing a part - really dreamy :-)
excellent stuff :-)
excellent stuff :-)
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8th Aug 2016 5:59pm
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8th Aug 2016 1:58pm
And you were concerned the poetry had left you? My dear, you ARE poetry! This is gorgeous! :)
Willow
Willow
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8th Aug 2016 6:00pm
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8th Aug 2016 6:14pm
Yes and yes poetic love it is,
and my heart is cover'd with
your wax.. this candled me
in such a way..
un'explainable mylittlecosmicgods
-Howlings
and my heart is cover'd with
your wax.. this candled me
in such a way..
un'explainable mylittlecosmicgods
-Howlings
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9th Aug 2016 5:24am
thank you dear one for feeling the poetic love of this write was meant for you all :)
love Crim
love Crim
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9th Aug 2016 6:00am
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9th Aug 2016 6:32am
Re. ~poetic love~
8th Aug 2016 11:03pm
This is fine work as always Crim, and I don't think you need to dance in anyone's artistic shadow. You're one of the brightest talents here. I love to read about your tender side and appreciate the shade. Thanks Crim!
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9th Aug 2016 5:25am
thank you Sir Crow I take my leave in the poetic shade that you all provide and it's an enchanting place to shelter.. I deeply appreciate the beautiful comment you so graciously bestowed upon me :)
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
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6th Dec 2019 10:14pm
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Re: Re. ~poetic love~
6th Dec 2019 10:30pm
thank you graciously dearest poet for such a beautiful comment...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤