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Re. The Day After
5th Aug 2016 1:53am
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5th Aug 2016 8:31pm
Re. The Day After
5th Aug 2016 7:57am
Fits the painting quite well "We wore summer's scent" great opening line!
A fine gem Vee, simply too beautiful for words.
~anonshadow😏
A fine gem Vee, simply too beautiful for words.
~anonshadow😏
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Re. The Day After
5th Aug 2016 9:15am
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11th Aug 2016 4:10pm
Re. The Day After
5th Aug 2016 9:18am
nothing like the feel of classic poetry..
this here rocked the senses..
"Heal my wounds
with wine and rhyme
spinning constellations
with stardust in our eyes
curved universe, speckled sky
celestial bodies shining bright
blooms loomed in bare arms
winter’s frost perched on my tongue. "
so so transcendent..
this here rocked the senses..
"Heal my wounds
with wine and rhyme
spinning constellations
with stardust in our eyes
curved universe, speckled sky
celestial bodies shining bright
blooms loomed in bare arms
winter’s frost perched on my tongue. "
so so transcendent..
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Re: Re. The Day After
11th Aug 2016 4:09pm
I enjoy weaving timeless imagery with words that sound complimentary. If I read it out loud and It doesn't please my ears, especially when the theme is love/heartbreak or loss then i feel it failed again as many times love does in our life.
Thank you Naajir for your beautiful compliment of classics :)
Thank you Naajir for your beautiful compliment of classics :)
Re. The Day After
5th Aug 2016 10:47am
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11th Aug 2016 4:11pm
Re. The Day After
5th Aug 2016 8:06pm
A stunner!!!! :)
"We wore summer's scent
just yesterday, sun-setting
beams reflecting through hair
hip to bone, skin to skin
young, wild and free
with placid moon
lingering in sheets
of sage and thyme."<---- this incredible opening hooked me!
I love your words, Vee! You are amazing with them....xo
"We wore summer's scent
just yesterday, sun-setting
beams reflecting through hair
hip to bone, skin to skin
young, wild and free
with placid moon
lingering in sheets
of sage and thyme."<---- this incredible opening hooked me!
I love your words, Vee! You are amazing with them....xo
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Re. The Day After
5th Aug 2016 9:36pm
Re. The Day After
6th Aug 2016 7:42am
Vee, you've weaved magic throughout this enchanting piece! A deep bow bravisima lady Vee!
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Re. The Day After
7th Aug 2016 7:19am
Re. The Day After
8th Aug 2016 3:35pm
lustrous lines in here Vee, "Fade into my hollow bones", just wow, astonishing art as usual...
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