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Eye see you

Staring at a blury point
then looking at a blue eye
then blank

Followed by extreme pain
slow and sharp
cutting the nerves away

Hearing the blade
bang around the eye socket
careful not to burst it

Pulling on the eye
feeling the last strands of nerves
snapping like ropes

The pain
is like ripping off a limb
from stretch to snap to nothing

It then shows me that
that eye!
my eye!
sticking it on a fork,
biting into it

It then writes on a small piece of paper
it shows me what it wrote
it giggles
and sticks the paper in my socket

"eye see you"
Written by highwaytohell (Greg)
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