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Blackened Table
the blade turns in my guts
I will write my epitaph in blood
black as my sin
dipped in the abyss of my soul
you've gutted me with your truths
I'm still on your chain
heeding the call of the dark one
this blasphemous whore comes crawling
wickedness bubbling and oozing to the surface
lick my mind and be appeased
the spires of thought
you've inked out have impaled me
Darkest one hear me now
I see and taste you
hell's fury blazing from your eyes
burning my soul with your vengeance
feeding you now from my blackened chalice
drink of me and find solace on this eve
the blade turns in my guts
I will write my epitaph in blood
black as my sin
dipped in the abyss of my soul
I writhe in agony on this night
can you feel me in the ether?
sending my spectral fingers
to rend your flesh in twain
you've left me gutted
splayed open for the vultures to pick at
I've cloaked myself with the stars
tearing the veil from me you command
woman stand and see!
I've laid witness to you on this black night
I hear you Sir do you see this woman
naked and shivering
would you abandon me in such a state?
leave me for the dogs to devour
no power, no cloak
to keep the demons at the door
Master please tame the beast in me
then come to me Darkly
let us drink to blood moons
forever in darkness
yours in this world and the next
your abomination incarnate
the spires of hell are shining
compelling the gate is ajar
the great maw open and never sated
enter at your own peril
we dive as one into the darkness
getting lost there never to be found
Published 31st Jul 2016
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31st Jul 2016 7:19am
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31st Jul 2016 7:57am
very true lovely one though my flame scares me for the truth of it..
love Crim
love Crim
31st Jul 2016 8:10am
I know how scary it can be and I immediately thought of Marianne Williamson:
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate.
Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure
It is our light, not our darkness that most frightens us.
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate.
Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure
It is our light, not our darkness that most frightens us.
31st Jul 2016 4:34pm
thank you dear one for your insight yes it's my light that frightens me most well revealing it anyway..
love Crim
love Crim
31st Jul 2016 7:53am
I also know that it doesn't always feel like that, but then again... aren't those days the most creative ones?
31st Jul 2016 7:56am
this was written for someone special in mind I hope he likes it and hears my plea..
yes there must always be a balance between light and dark no matter how precarious that line is..
thank you dear one for giving me a sip of light on this night..
love Crim
yes there must always be a balance between light and dark no matter how precarious that line is..
thank you dear one for giving me a sip of light on this night..
love Crim
I feel honoured that I gave you a sip of light and I really hope he hears your plea!!!
Take care ♥
Love, Duende
Take care ♥
Love, Duende
31st Jul 2016 4:45pm
31st Jul 2016 8:13am
31st Jul 2016 4:36pm
thank you for visiting my pages and leaving your thoughts it's appreciated..
love Crim
love Crim
31st Jul 2016 9:11am
31st Jul 2016 4:37pm
31st Jul 2016 9:58am
Darkly amazing trip into the mind n soul...wow, your a master at thisy dear!
31st Jul 2016 4:37pm
31st Jul 2016 10:35am
I read this top to bottom and botto, to top
Intense both ways
Nobody on this site does this better than you
Dark Like
Xo
Intense both ways
Nobody on this site does this better than you
Dark Like
Xo
31st Jul 2016 4:38pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
31st Jul 2016 11:14am
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31st Jul 2016 4:39pm
31st Jul 2016 2:46pm
You, Dear Brenda, are exceptionally gifted.
You write of the dark better than anyone I
have read. I feel it is because of your internal
and physical problem, I trust in time you will0
be able to conquer them both.
You write of the dark better than anyone I
have read. I feel it is because of your internal
and physical problem, I trust in time you will0
be able to conquer them both.
thank you Jerry for putting a big smile on my face :)
your insight is deeply appreciated..
love you my friend..
xoxo Brenda
your insight is deeply appreciated..
love you my friend..
xoxo Brenda
Anonymous
31st Jul 2016 2:48pm
A hauntingly beautiful masterpiece.
The darkness of angst, turmoil and pain. All which is felt, and deeply.
The deep ache, which I know no other can compare.
You truly blew me away, with this art form deliverance.
Amazing talent.
The darkness of angst, turmoil and pain. All which is felt, and deeply.
The deep ache, which I know no other can compare.
You truly blew me away, with this art form deliverance.
Amazing talent.
31st Jul 2016 4:44pm
Anonymous
31st Jul 2016 5:28pm
Haunting and atmoshperic write...the darkness radiating from this is beautiful.
31st Jul 2016 7:44pm
31st Jul 2016 7:49pm
you've gutted me with your truths
The truth will gut your heart in an instant;
however, it also frees it of non-essential weight
that it can rise in love freely.
This is the Lion's Gate we're in - take care of
the energy and trust each step into the unknown.
There is a light that will guide your steps.
Hoping he hears your plea and answers with his own.
xo
The truth will gut your heart in an instant;
however, it also frees it of non-essential weight
that it can rise in love freely.
This is the Lion's Gate we're in - take care of
the energy and trust each step into the unknown.
There is a light that will guide your steps.
Hoping he hears your plea and answers with his own.
xo
2nd Aug 2016 12:17pm
31st Jul 2016 9:18pm
"then come to me Darkly
let us drink to blood moons
forever in darkness
yours in this world and the next
your abomination incarnate"
Masterfully wrought, Lady Crim. Humbled by your passion and skill.
let us drink to blood moons
forever in darkness
yours in this world and the next
your abomination incarnate"
Masterfully wrought, Lady Crim. Humbled by your passion and skill.
2nd Aug 2016 12:18pm
thank you Darkest Lord Hades I'm always ecstatic to have you visiting my pages and leaving your thoughts..
love Crim
love Crim
31st Jul 2016 10:24pm
Whew Crim.......you never fail to deliver a standing ovation write......one that sends shivers thru my soul......purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Aug 2016 12:19pm
aw thank you lovely Flower for such a gracious comment :)
hugs you back..
xo Crim
hugs you back..
xo Crim
1st Aug 2016 00:03am
2nd Aug 2016 12:20pm
1st Aug 2016 5:49am
Good Gawd....your darkness is so damn gorgeous!
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"the spires of hell are shining
compelling the gate is ajar
the great maw open and never sated
enter at your own peril
we dive as one into the darkness
getting lost there never to be found "<---- LOVED!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
"the spires of hell are shining
compelling the gate is ajar
the great maw open and never sated
enter at your own peril
we dive as one into the darkness
getting lost there never to be found "<---- LOVED!
2nd Aug 2016 12:21pm
thank you most graciously lovely Rain a big smile gracing my face :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
1st Aug 2016 8:49pm
deliciously dark epic poem - oh! to find the route to the contentment of my very soul - this one really has got me thinking :-)
2nd Aug 2016 12:22pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
1st Aug 2016 9:01pm
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2nd Aug 2016 12:24pm
thank you Todski I find pain to be part of the pleasure on the road to fulfilling lust and truth..
always a sting no?
love and respect Crim
always a sting no?
love and respect Crim
1st Aug 2016 9:45pm
So intense Crim! This has the darkest thrills and I feel scorched reading it. You've "cloaked yourself with the stars," and I hope they ward off the lesser evils. And I hope your Master has mercy on you, maybe for his own sake. Hell hath to fury.... ..
2nd Aug 2016 12:25pm
2nd Aug 2016 9:26am
in the depths of that cathedral
you are mistress & wife, Crim,
easily fulfilling those duties.
darker than dark, & we wander w/pitiful eyes...
you are mistress & wife, Crim,
easily fulfilling those duties.
darker than dark, & we wander w/pitiful eyes...
2nd Aug 2016 12:25pm
